2017雅思寫作高分話題語料：自然資源短缺原因及解決方法

本期雅思寫作語料有關(guān)環(huán)境類話題，討論資源短缺的原因和解決方法。題目是：World’s natural resources such as oil，forests and fresh water are consumed at an ever-increasing rate, what are the causes and how to solve it? 世界的自然資源例如石油，森林，淡水在日益減少，原因何在，如何解決?更多雅思寫作大作文話題語料及觀點(diǎn)，請(qǐng)看下文。

解析：at an ever-increasing rate v以愈來愈快的速度

如何打造高分作文：

蓋樓房：圖紙：謀篇布局 + 思路拓展

原料：精準(zhǔn)詞匯 + 學(xué)術(shù)句型

分析問題解決問題話題布局圖：

首段：背景介紹(個(gè)性開篇) + 問題影響(對(duì)于國家，企業(yè)，個(gè)人)+寫作目的(清晰表達(dá))

二段：問題原因的展開：(客觀上 + 主觀上)(社會(huì)原因 + 家庭原因 + 個(gè)人原因)

三段：解決策略的展開：(政府做;媒體做;企業(yè)做;家庭做;個(gè)人做)

尾段：再次亮明觀點(diǎn) + 總結(jié)理由(強(qiáng)調(diào)協(xié)調(diào)努力)

【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】：托福寫作是經(jīng)常提問是否……是解決問題的最佳的途徑，這就和雅思寫作的分析問題及解決問題相似了。

例如：The best way to learn about a foreign country is to read newspapers and magazines from that country?Do you agree or disagree?(托福題庫)

假如給我一套模板：

首段：背景介紹 +寫作目的

Never has …… in our community been as severe as it now is. …… is soaring at an alarming rate, for reasons which are not easily explained. This essay will attempt to discover some of the reasons and explore some possible solutions.

填空詞匯：

1. energy crisis n能源危機(jī)

2. various depletion of natural resources n 各種各樣能源的消耗

二段：三個(gè)原因的展開：

One the of most contributing factors of …… could be attributed to …… By that I mean, ……Still, …… often exert great negative influence on ……, because……Last, …… is also the root cause of ……，……

三段：解決策略的展開：

Considering the seriousness of the issue, it is imperative to implement some practical solutions. First，the government should give priority to ……. More precisely, to enact relevant legislations to……. Further, much emphasis should be put on strengthening publicity, for it will aid us in fostering……. Last, …… must take every step necessary to ……

尾段：總結(jié)全文：強(qiáng)調(diào)協(xié)同努力;

Only when the government, society and every family join hands in resolving the issue will we ……

點(diǎn)評(píng)：政府做;媒體做;企業(yè)做;個(gè)人做……

出題背景：中國在建設(shè)節(jié)約型社會(huì)的背景下。

【名師思路拓展】：

1. 需求增加——滿足需求——依賴高科技產(chǎn)品和利用自然能源

2. 意識(shí)缺乏——宣傳教育——提高環(huán)保和節(jié)能意識(shí)

3. 利用不合理——資源浪費(fèi)——合理布局

點(diǎn)評(píng)：水污染;森林砍伐;

【原創(chuàng)語料庫】

1. almost uses up the world fuel resources v 幾乎用盡了世界的燃料資源

2. …… lead to energy crisis v導(dǎo)致能源危機(jī)

3. consume the energies and resources v 消耗能源和資源

點(diǎn)評(píng)：主語就是各種交通工具和現(xiàn)代化建筑。

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4. Alarmingly，we, human beings, are now facing a series of resource-related problems such as water scarcity or various depletion of natural recourses although our economy keeps on increasing. 具有諷刺意味的是，盡管我們的經(jīng)濟(jì)在不斷攀升，但是，我們?nèi)祟悈s面對(duì)著一系列和能源相關(guān)的問題例如水源短缺以及自然資源的消耗。

【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】：個(gè)性開篇;首段亮劍。

5. Ironically, the history of the development of economic development is also a history of man’s increasing destruction of nature. 具有諷刺意味的是，經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展的歷史也是人類不斷破壞自然的歷史。

解析：Ironically adv 具有諷刺意味的是……

6. Alarmingly，the depletion of natural resources has long been a problem of great concern and complaint in many cities around the globe. 在世界上，很多國家抱怨和關(guān)注的問題之一就是自然資源的消耗。

【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】：切題的開篇句

7. To avoid an oil shortage， more productions must harness natural energy such as solar energy，wind energy and tidal energy .為避免油料的短缺,更多的生產(chǎn)應(yīng)該利用自然能源例如太陽能，風(fēng)能和潮汐能。

解析：荷蘭的風(fēng)車發(fā)電。

解析：harness v 利用(尤其指的自然能源)

解釋：harness：control and use a natural force to produce electrical power, etc 控制及利用(自然界的力量)以產(chǎn)生電能等:

例證：harness a river, a waterfall, the sun's rays as a source of energy 利用河水﹑ 瀑布﹑ 太陽光作為能源.

8. To develop and popularize cleaner cars could effectively ease the excessive consumption of fuels. 研發(fā)和普及環(huán)保汽車可以有效地緩解過度的燃料消耗。

【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】：有效例證

9. The public should also be encourage to take public transit 應(yīng)該鼓勵(lì)公眾乘坐公共交通工具。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：環(huán)保類能源類話題的萬能解決策略之一。

10. raise the environmental awareness amongst the general public v 提高公眾的環(huán)保意識(shí)。

【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】：環(huán)保類能源類話題的萬能解決策略之一

11. Also, efforts should be made by experts to explore and popularize new eco-friendly fuels and energies. 專家努力去研發(fā)和普及新型的環(huán)保的燃料和能源。

12. To illustrate, to research and tap fuel-cell-driven cars could effectively ease the energy crisis triggered by public transport. 研發(fā)電瓶驅(qū)動(dòng)汽車可以有效地緩解由公共交通帶來的能源危機(jī)。

解析：fuel-cell-driven cars n電瓶驅(qū)動(dòng)的汽車

解析：fuel 燃料;cell 電池; drive v開車

【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】：寫作亮點(diǎn);一針見血;一定可用。

13. It is the duty of everyone of us to cultivate energy preservation awareness. For example, fostering water-wise lifestyle, leading a simple lifestyle should be advocated amongst the general public. 人人有責(zé)，培養(yǎng)節(jié)能的意識(shí)。例如，培養(yǎng)節(jié)水的生活方式以及簡單生活應(yīng)該在大眾中得以推廣。

解析：amongst the general public 在大眾中

解析：among = amongst 在……之中(三者以上)

14. New types of fuel will definitely be found and then, substitute some highly polluted fuels. 新的燃料一定會(huì)被找到，代替高度污染的燃料。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：研發(fā)新能源是環(huán)境保護(hù)的萬能解決方法

15. New type of fuel is characteristic of low-consumption and eco-friendliness. 新能源具有低消耗和環(huán)保的特征。

解析：is characteristic of …… v具有……的特征

16. Obviously， man depends on nature for survival and development. 顯而易見，人類的生存和發(fā)展依賴于自然。

【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】：強(qiáng)調(diào)節(jié)能的重要性。

17. There are still many problems in energy protection in recent years. 近年來，能源保護(hù)仍面臨著許多的問題。

18. The fact is that the depletion of various natural resources has deteriorated beyond people’s imagination. 事實(shí)上，能源消耗的的程度遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)超乎人們的想象。

解析：deteriorate v 惡化

19. Those who destroy the environment indiscriminately should be penalized severely. 任何肆無忌憚地破壞自然的人都應(yīng)該會(huì)受到嚴(yán)厲的懲罰。

解析：discriminate v區(qū)分

解析：indiscriminately adv不加選擇地

20. It is high time that we reversed this trend and got people to adopt a simpler life style and cherished our planet’s limited resources. 我們要逆轉(zhuǎn)這種趨勢，讓人們適應(yīng)一種更加簡單的生活方式，珍惜我們的星球上有限的自然資源。這件事情已經(jīng)迫在眉睫。

【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】：虛擬語氣;尾段總結(jié);寫作亮劍。

解析：It is high time that we …… 是我們做……的時(shí)候了(強(qiáng)調(diào)本該做，但是沒有做)

21. One of the most distributing issues concerning our environment is the shortage of fresh water. 如今，最困擾人們的問題之一就是淡水資源的缺乏。

【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】：淡水短缺如果換成資源短缺，就是對(duì)全文背景的概況。

22. It is universally accepted that fresh water is crucial to human life and our daily life. 正如我們所知，淡水對(duì)于人的生命和日常生活是至關(guān)重要的。

解析：is crucial to …… 對(duì)……是至關(guān)重要

解析： it is universally accepted that …… 人們普遍接受的是……

23. Water pollution is known to be the major factor that has caused the scarcity. 水污染被認(rèn)為是造成水缺乏的主要原因。

解析：…… is known to be the major factor that has caused …… 是引起……的主要的根源(談及原因的句型)

24. The government is urged to take feasible measures to ease the scarcity of natural resources. 政府被要求采取可行的措施來緩解資源短缺的問題。

25. The public should also be educated to cultivate a water-wise life style and to treasure other natural resources. 應(yīng)該教育公眾養(yǎng)成節(jié)水的生活方式，珍惜其他自然資源。