例句：
In order to live a good life, it is becoming more and more important for people to learnknowledge well. Because in this modern world, knowledge is everything.
改句：
In order to live a happy(wonderful) life, it is becoming increasingly important for people toacquire knowledge well, for the reason that knowledge is everything in this modern world.
【解析】
首先我們看到原句中出現(xiàn)了more and more，在四六級(jí)作文中，它可算是?？?，對(duì)閱卷老師而言，不具任何吸引力，而且有落入俗套的危險(xiǎn)哦，所以在我們把它用一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的副詞來(lái)替代，副詞修飾形容詞，相信會(huì)令人感覺(jué)眼前一亮。
其次，我們還要注意一個(gè)搭配問(wèn)題，原句中的learn knowledge是明顯的中式英語(yǔ)，很多同學(xué)會(huì)誤用，正確的搭配應(yīng)該是acquire knowledge。
最后，我們有余力可以把句子通過(guò)從句進(jìn)行相連，使句子看起來(lái)更有結(jié)構(gòu)感。
下面大家一起來(lái)試試吧！
1.China is developing very fast in recent years.
答案：
China is highly developed in recent years.
