Write a composition entitled Silence Is Gold. You should write atleast 120 words according to the outline given below in Chiness.
1.許多場(chǎng)合中“沉默是金”是正確的;
2.但也有例外的情形;
3.你的結(jié)論。
【步驟構(gòu)思】
步驟1：
審題：這是一篇以沉默是金為主題的議論文。
步驟2：
引入話題：開篇指出要討論的諺語(yǔ)是“沉默是金”;
展開話題：從三個(gè)方面闡述這一短語(yǔ)的重要性并指出例外的情況;
話題結(jié)論：有時(shí)候要遵循沉默是金，但有時(shí)候卻不一定。
【作文背誦范文】
Silence Is Gold
When we talk of the famous proverb "Silence is gold", we should not simply label it as right orwrong, but explore it in depth.
當(dāng)我們談到“沉默是金”這一著名的諺語(yǔ)時(shí)，我們不應(yīng)該簡(jiǎn)單地把其標(biāo)注為正確或錯(cuò)誤，而應(yīng)該進(jìn)行深入探討。
This proverb is especially true under several situations. First, if we have made a promise not to letout a secret, we should always keep silent. Second, we should avoid talking over facts or statisticsof which we are not sure. Third, whenever we are expressing our ideas， brevity is the soul of witand talking too much will always lead to faults and mistakes.
這一諺語(yǔ)在一些情況下尤其如此。首先，如果我們作出了承諾要保守秘密，我們應(yīng)該始終保持沉默。第二，我們應(yīng)該避免談?wù)撐覀儾淮_定的事實(shí)或統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)據(jù)。第三，無(wú)論什么時(shí)候我們表達(dá)自己的想法時(shí)，言貴簡(jiǎn)潔，說(shuō)話太多往往會(huì)導(dǎo)致錯(cuò)誤。
Nevertheless, there are also some exceptions. If we find out a flaw in other's speaking or writing, weshould not hesitate a moment to point it out. And to friends or acquaintances seeking advice, weshould feel free to help them.
不過(guò)，也有一些例外。如果我們?cè)谒说恼f(shuō)話或?qū)懽髦邪l(fā)現(xiàn)了一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤，我們應(yīng)該毫不猶豫地指出來(lái)。在朋友或熟人征尋意見(jiàn)時(shí)，我們應(yīng)該隨時(shí)幫助他們。
In a word, we can draw the conclusion that in most cases "silence is gold", but in certaincircumstances, talking is the right choice. (155 words)
總之，我們可以得出這樣的結(jié)論，在大多數(shù)情況下“沉默是金”，但在某些情況下，說(shuō)話是正確的選擇。
【高分句型解析】
Third, whenever we are expressing our ideas, brevity is the soul of wit and talking too much willalways lead to faults and mistakes.第三，無(wú)論什么時(shí)候我們表達(dá)自己的想法時(shí)，言貴簡(jiǎn)潔，說(shuō)話太多往往會(huì)導(dǎo)致錯(cuò)誤。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：這句話中有兩個(gè)得分點(diǎn)，一是運(yùn)用了諺語(yǔ)"brevity is the soul of wit"表示“言貴簡(jiǎn)潔”，二是運(yùn)用了一組近義詞faults and mistakes，用不同的詞表達(dá)相同的意思，這樣詞下文還有flaw。
【作文加分詞】
explore sth. in depth 深度探討某物
make a promise 作出承諾
let out a secret 泄露秘密
talk over 商討，討論
brevity is the soul of wit 言貴簡(jiǎn)潔
acquaintance [?'kweint?ns] n.熟人
seek advice 尋求建議
draw the conclusion 得出結(jié)論
