英語六級寫作高分范文：團(tuán)結(jié)的力量

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Unity breeds success by commenting on Albert Einstein’s famous remark, “A snowflake is one of God’s most fragile creations, but look what they can do when they stick together! ”You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

　　范文：團(tuán)結(jié)的力量

　　Unity breeds success

　　I assume that you are familiar with the words of Einstein, who once said, “A snowflake is one of God’s most fragile creations, but look what they can do when they stick together! ”Definitely, A snowflake is easy to melt when it lands on the soil. However, when falling on the ground together, they can create a snow-wrapped world with splendid scene. It is obvious that unity transforms snowflake’s vulnerability into strength.

　　Simple as Einstein’s remark may sound, it contains abundant life philosophy and informs us of the significance of unity. why does unity play an indispensable role in our life ? Unity enables us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize our dreams more rapidly. In such a competitive world of today, it is not personal strength that the achievement of any course depends on; it condenses the energies of a group. To further demonstrate the importance of unity, I would like to take Chinese Communist Party as a case in point, how could she achieve the victory of Anti-Japanese War if she failed to unite Chinese people of all ethnic groups ?

　　From my perspective, at no time should we ignore the importance of unity. Accordingly，we should foster the consciousness of unity and always bear in mind that unity can create miracles no matter what obstacles we meet. “Many hands make light work.” John Heywood also once said. (234words )

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　　我覺你應(yīng)該對愛因斯坦說過的一句話非常熟悉，叫做“一片雪花是上帝最脆弱的創(chuàng)造物之一，但他們抱在一起的時(shí)候卻令人刮目相看。”確實(shí)，一片雪花，降落在地，極易融化消失。然而，當(dāng)很多雪花一起飄落人間，他們足以創(chuàng)造出片銀裝素裹的美景。很明顯，正是團(tuán)結(jié)，將雪花從脆弱變得強(qiáng)大。

　　盡管愛因斯坦的話聽起來很簡單，但卻包含了豐富的人生哲理，并告訴我們團(tuán)結(jié)很重要。為什么團(tuán)結(jié)會在我們的生活當(dāng)中扮演重要的角色呢?團(tuán)結(jié)可以使我們更順利地達(dá)成目標(biāo)、更快速地實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想。在競爭如此激烈的當(dāng)今世界，任何事情的成功都無法僅僅依靠一個(gè)人的力量，而需要凝結(jié)整個(gè)團(tuán)隊(duì)的力量。為了進(jìn)一步證明團(tuán)結(jié)的重要性，我想以中國共產(chǎn)黨為例，如果中國共產(chǎn)黨沒有團(tuán)結(jié)各族人民的力量，她怎么可能去的抗日戰(zhàn)爭的勝利呢?

　　在我看來，我們?nèi)魏螘r(shí)候都不能忽視團(tuán)結(jié)的重要性。因此，我們應(yīng)該培養(yǎng)團(tuán)結(jié)的意識，并且永遠(yuǎn)銘記在心，只要團(tuán)結(jié)，不管遇到什么樣的困難，我們都能夠創(chuàng)造奇跡。約翰.伍德也曾經(jīng)說過“眾人拾柴火焰高。”