一、寫作思路
首段:提出當(dāng)前的環(huán)境問(wèn)題嚴(yán)重影響到了人們的生活質(zhì)量。與此同時(shí),人們的環(huán)保意識(shí)也有了很大的提高,開始重視這一問(wèn)題,由此引出綠色生活方式的主題。
關(guān)鍵點(diǎn):環(huán)境問(wèn)題嚴(yán)重+環(huán)保意識(shí)提高。
中段:具體闡述為了實(shí)現(xiàn)綠色生活方式,我們應(yīng)該做些什么??梢詮睦诸悺⑸钣秒?、綠色出行、多使用可再生資源等角度來(lái)寫,并用例子來(lái)說(shuō)明。
關(guān)鍵點(diǎn):一定要從具體事例出發(fā),可以多舉幾個(gè)例子。
末段:提出對(duì)于綠色生活方式的向往,可以簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明綠色生活方式能給人們的生活帶來(lái)哪些好處。
關(guān)鍵點(diǎn):提出期望。
二、參考范文和譯文
參考范文
A Green Life Style
In this day and age, environmental degradation presents great danger to the public. People in my country, and other places, have to bear polluted water and haze day after day. As public awareness of the need for environmental protection grows in these countries, it is urgent to learn how to establish a green life style.
To achieve a green life style, we must adjust our behavior. This can be done even with simple things. For example, we could sort out our trash for better recycling. At home, we can use lights and other electricity only when needed. We should properly maintain air conditioners twice a year so they will run efficiently, and, even more importantly, make sure doors and windows fit properly and are sealed so that we can use less energy in heating and cooling. Other simple steps that make a big difference include using public transportation instead of driving private cars.
Commuters can choose to take buses, subways or share cars with others, which not only relieves traffic jams but also reduces gas emission.
In my mind, it is high time to establish a general concept of sustainable development and green life style in China. The Earth has provided humans what they need; it is time to pay back. Only through a green life, can we ensure that we and our children live in an environment with green water and mountains, without traffic jams, and in an era with better living habits.