英語六級命題作文：對于惡劣服務的投訴信
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A Complaint About Bad Service
Oct. 26, 2013
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you to complain about the service of your local express, which turned my trip last week into a nightmare. The major problems are as follows. In the first place, the so-called "luxury car" before me was not in good condition. In the second place, the only train attendant available was the most unhelpful person I have ever seen. Worst of all, when the train finally arrived in London, it was six hours late.
I think several measures should be taken to solve these problems. First, the cars of your train need maintenance on regular basis. Second, the train attendants need training on how to make the trip with your train more pleasantly. Last but not least, you also have to make effort to make sure your trains leave and arrive on time.
It is my sincere hope that these problems above will be solved as soon as possible. I'm looking forward to your early reply. Thanks for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
(176 words)
結(jié)構(gòu)剖析
文章分為三段
第一段是點出了自己的目的是投訴，并說明了事件的過程。
第二段是提出了自己認為有效的三個措施。
第三段是表達自己對問題解決的期待。
對于惡劣服務的投訴信
尊敬的先生/女士：
我寫信是要投訴你們當?shù)氐目爝f，上周把我的旅行變成了一場噩夢。主要問題如下：首先，我面前所謂的"豪華車廂"有損壞。其次，僅有的一個列車員是我曾遇到過的最不愿幫助人的人了。最糟糕的是，當火車最終到達倫敦的時候，晚點了6個小時。
我認為應該采取一些措施來解決問題。第一，火車的車廂需要定期維修。第二，列車服務員需要進行培訓，學習如何讓乘你們車的旅客旅行更愉快。最后，你們還必須努力確?；疖嚋庶c出發(fā)和到達。
我衷心希望以上問題能盡快得到解決。期望得到你盡快的回復。謝謝你抽時間閱讀我的投訴。
李明
2013年10月26日
complain about 抱怨......
turn...into 把......變成......
in the first place 首先
in good condition 狀況良好
in the second place 其次
train attendant 列車服務員
worst of all 最糟糕的是
first adv.首先
maintenance n. 維護，維修
second adv. 其次
last but not least 最后也是相當重要的一點
on time 按時
1. I am writing to you to complain about the service of your local express, which turned my trip last week into a nightmare. 我寫信是要投訴你們當?shù)氐目爝f，上周把我的旅行變成了一場噩夢。
2. In the second place, the only train attendant available was the most unhelpful person I have ever seen. 其次，僅有的一個列車員是我曾遇到過的最不愿幫助人的人了。
3. It is my sincere hope that these problems above will be solved as soon as possible. 我衷心希望以上問題能盡快得到解決。
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