六級高分作文_交真正的朋友
交真正的朋友
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on making true friends by commenting on the remark, “As we grow up, we realize it becomes less important to have more friends and more important to have real ones .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
審題立意
1. 導(dǎo)語解讀：要求考生對引言進(jìn)行評論，就“交真正的朋友”這一話題展開論述。
2. 文章立意：朋友是我們生活中必不可少的人，但真正的朋友卻甚少。人生得一知己足矣。因此，要交真正的朋友。
寫作思路
1. 第一段簡要評論引言，然后提出論點(diǎn)：要交真正的朋友。
2. 第二段通過排比論證的方式闡述何謂真正的朋友，明確如何交友。
3. 第三段指出，交友勿需多，需交那些誠實(shí)可靠之人作為真正的朋友。
參考范文
“As we grow up, we realize it becomes less important to have more friends and more important to have real ones.” This remark implies that real friends are important to our life. 1 Therefore, we should make true friends. 2
True friends always help and learn from each other; 3 true friends are always loyal to each other; 3 true friends always keep a secret for each other; 3 true friends are always dependable and reliable; 3 true friends never take advantage of each other; 3 true friends may not share the same way of life, but they are likely to share the same way of thinking. 3 In a word, true friends are friends through thick and thin. 4
Everyone needs friends. We can share happiness and sorrows with our friends. When we are in trouble, we can turn to them. 5 It’s a pity that only true friends can do that. Just as an old saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” 5 Since the number of friends may not be so important, we should make friends with those who are honest and reliable. 6
“隨著我們長大，我們意識到，重要的不是朋友越多越好，而是要有真正的朋友。”這句話意味著真正的朋友對我們的一生很重要。因此，我們要交真正的朋友。
真正的朋友始終相互幫助，相互學(xué)習(xí)；真正的朋友彼此始終真誠相待；真正的朋友始終相互為對方保守秘密；真正的朋友始終值得依靠和信賴；真正的朋友從不相互利用；真正的朋友也許沒有共同的生活方式，但可能有著共同的思考方式。總之，真正的朋友可以患難與共。
每個人都需要朋友。和朋友我們可以分享快樂與悲傷。當(dāng)我們陷入麻煩，我們可以向他們求助?？上У氖侵挥姓嬲呐笥巡拍茏龅竭@一點(diǎn)。就像老話所說的：“患難見真情”。朋友的數(shù)量未必重要，所以，我們應(yīng)該交那些誠實(shí)可靠的朋友。
范文點(diǎn)評
1. 開篇引入引言，并揭示引言含義。
2. 首段末句提出文章論點(diǎn)：我們要交真正的朋友。
3. 用排比論證的方式闡述什么是真正的朋友。
4. 對上文論述進(jìn)行總結(jié)。
5. 末段進(jìn)一步闡述交真正朋友的重要意義。
6. 末句重申觀點(diǎn)，結(jié)束全文。
要點(diǎn)用法
dependable adj. 可靠的；可信賴的
take advantage of 利用
reliable adj. 可靠的
through thick and thin 在任何情況下；不顧艱難
句法點(diǎn)評
1. As we grow up, we realize it becomes less important to have more friends and more important to have real ones.
as引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句，it為賓語從句中的形式主語，真正的主語是不定式to have more friends和to have real ones；賓語從句中l(wèi)ess important和more important構(gòu)成對照關(guān)系，共同充當(dāng)賓語從句中的表語。
2. It’s a pity that only true friends can do that.
此句為主語從句句式：It’s+n. +that從句，主語從句句式的使用增加了文章句式的多樣化。
