六級高分作文_從小事做起
從小事做起
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on starting from doing simple things by commenting on the remark, “Only those who have the patience to do simple things perfectly ever acquire the skill to do difficult things easily .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
審題立意
1. 導(dǎo)語解讀：要求考生從評論“只有有耐心圓滿完成簡單工作的人，才能夠獲得輕松完成困難事情的技能”這一引言入手，就“從小事做起”這一話題進(jìn)行闡述。
2. 文章立意：做大事固然重要，但如果不能踏踏實(shí)實(shí)做好每一件平凡的小事，就不可能成功做好任何一件大事。做小事和做大事之間有著密不可分的聯(lián)系。
寫作思路
1. 第一段簡要解釋導(dǎo)語中的引言，然后提出文章論點(diǎn)。
2. 第二段通過比較和舉例的方式闡明要做大事首先應(yīng)做好小事的道理。
3. 第三段呼應(yīng)文章論點(diǎn)，再次強(qiáng)調(diào)做小事的重要性。
參考范文
“Only those who have the patience to do simple things perfectly ever acquire the skill to do difficult things easily”. Obviously, this refers to the relationship between doing small things and undertaking something big. 1 It is true even today. 2 We cannot expect to do difficult things with ease if we are not patient enough to do simple things perfectly. 3
There is no denying that if one intends to undertake greater responsibility it is advisable for him to begin with small tasks. Nowadays it has become a trend for many youngsters to talk big. Meanwhile, an increasing number of them deem it useless to do small things like cleaning dorms and washing clothes. 4 However, it is small tasks that enable one to build up adequate experience, knowledge and skills that will be helpful in tackling big tasks. As a matter of fact, an increasing number of wise people have come to realize the significance of small success in life, work and study. 5
As a college student, I am firmly convinced of the necessity to enhance ourselves by doing small tasks. Accordingly, we should encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to be patient with every small thing so that we will embrace a promising future. 6
“只有有耐心圓滿完成簡單工作的人，才能夠獲得輕松完成困難事情的技能?！憋@然，這句話說的是做小事和做大事之間的關(guān)系。即便如今，這句話也是正確的。如果我們沒有足夠的耐心去做好簡單的事情，就不能指望輕而易舉地完成困難的事情。
毫無疑問，如果一個(gè)人想要承擔(dān)更大的責(zé)任，最好從小事做起。當(dāng)今，很多年輕人都喜歡說大話。同時(shí)，越來越多的年輕人認(rèn)為諸如打掃宿舍、洗衣服之類的小事都不值得去做。然而，殊不知正是小事能使人積累足夠的經(jīng)驗(yàn)、知識以及技能，而這些經(jīng)驗(yàn)、知識和技能將有助于我們處理重大任務(wù)。事實(shí)上，越來越多的聰明人已經(jīng)開始意識到生活、工作和學(xué)習(xí)中那些小小的成功的意義了。
作為一名大學(xué)生，我堅(jiān)信我們有必要通過完成簡單的任務(wù)提升自己。因此，我們應(yīng)該鼓勵(lì)我們的朋友、同學(xué)和熟人耐心做好每一件小事，從而擁有充滿希望的未來。
范文點(diǎn)評
1. 開篇引入題目中的引言，同時(shí)結(jié)合主題準(zhǔn)確傳遞出這句引言的內(nèi)涵。
2. 自然過渡，引出這句話在當(dāng)今依然適用。
3. 首段末句明確表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)：如不能認(rèn)真對待每一件小事，就不可能輕而易舉地完成困難的事。
4. 舉反面事例說明當(dāng)今社會(huì)“說大話”和“小事無用論”已成為一種趨勢，樹立靶子，為下文的批駁作鋪墊。
5. 反駁上文所述現(xiàn)象，從正面說明認(rèn)真完成小事的意義。
6. 末段總結(jié)全文，重申觀點(diǎn)。
要點(diǎn)用法
undertake v. 承擔(dān)，從事
intend to 打算（做）……
advisable adj. 明智的，可取的
trend n. 趨向
youngster n. 年輕人
deem v. 認(rèn)為
adequate adj. 足夠的
as a matter of fact 事實(shí)上
significance n. 重要性
convince v. 使相信，說服
enhance v. 提高，增加
accordingly adv. 因此，于是
acquaintance n. 熟人；熟悉
句法點(diǎn)評
1. There is no denying that if one intends to undertake greater responsibility it is advisable for him to begin with small tasks.
There is no denying that...是一個(gè)固定句式，意為“毫無疑問，毋庸置疑……”。由that引導(dǎo)的從句中包含了一個(gè)由if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，這種從句也稱為嵌入式從句。
2. However, it is small tasks that enable one to build up adequate experience, knowledge and skills that will be helpful in tackling big tasks.
這句話是一個(gè)強(qiáng)調(diào)句式，被強(qiáng)調(diào)的部分為small tasks，是為了突出做小事情的作用。強(qiáng)調(diào)句的結(jié)構(gòu)為：It is (was)+被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+that (who)+句子其他部分，被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分為物時(shí)只能由that引導(dǎo)，指人時(shí)，既可以用that，也可以用who。強(qiáng)調(diào)句是一種修辭，是人們?yōu)榱吮磉_(dá)自己的意愿和情感而使用的一種句式。
3. As a college student, I am firmly convinced of the necessity to enhance ourselves by doing small tasks.
這句話中有兩個(gè)重要結(jié)構(gòu)，第一個(gè)是be convinced of，意為“確信……”，另一個(gè)是the necessity to do sth.，意為“有必要做某事”。
