六級高分作文_經(jīng)驗的重要性

　經(jīng)驗的重要性

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “Experience without learning is better than learning without experience .” You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to make yourself more experienced . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

審題立意

1. 導語解讀：要求考生根據(jù)給定的話語就“經(jīng)驗和學習的關系”這一話題展開論述，闡明經(jīng)驗的重要性。

2. 文章立意：經(jīng)驗從學習中得來，但沒有經(jīng)驗的學習只是一紙空文，沒什么意義。因此，經(jīng)驗很重要。

寫作思路

1. 第一段簡要解釋給定話語的含義，然后提出論點：經(jīng)驗很重要。

2. 第二段通過成功人士的做法說明經(jīng)驗的重要性，同時提出如何使自己更具有經(jīng)驗。

3. 第三段以大學生為例論述使自己經(jīng)驗豐富的方法。

參考范文

“Experience without learning is better than learning without experience.” The saying means that experience is of vital importance and one can have only learning with no experience. It stresses the importance of experience. 1

I totally agree with that. 2 Successful people are willing to learn from their experience immediately. They know that failure is the mother of success. Whenever they fail, after introspecting for a while, they can learn a lot from their experience. Doing this, they can know the mistakes and make some changes. Then they will start again and continue struggling for success. They do know the importance of experience. So what can you do to make yourself more experienced? 3

For my part, it is worthwhile for senior university students to spend some time acquiring experience in vocational and volunteer activities, which will provide us with the necessary workplace skills and experience, boost our appeal in the eyes of employers because the activities can build our strength of character and reveal an innate desire to work. There’s no doubt that we’ll be afforded a unique edge over the majority of our contemporaries. 4

“有經(jīng)驗而無學問勝于有學問而無經(jīng)驗。”這句話的意思是，經(jīng)驗是至關重要的，如果不實踐，人只能空有知識。它強調(diào)了經(jīng)驗的重要性。

我完全同意這種看法。成功人士愿意及時吸取經(jīng)驗。他們懂得失敗乃成功之母。每當他們失敗時，短時間反省之后，他們都能從失敗的經(jīng)驗中汲取很多教訓。這樣，他們就能了解自己的錯誤并做出一些改變，然后重振旗鼓，繼續(xù)為成功而斗爭。他們的確懂得經(jīng)驗的重要性，那么做些什么才能豐富你的經(jīng)驗呢？

對我來說，大學的高年級學生花費一些時間從求職和志愿者活動中獲取經(jīng)驗是值得的，這會為我們提供必要的職場技能與經(jīng)驗，提升我們在雇主眼中的吸引力，因為這些活動能塑造我們堅強的品格并展示一種內(nèi)在的工作欲望。毋庸置疑，我們會超越大多數(shù)同齡人而獲得一種獨特的優(yōu)勢。

范文點評

1. 開篇簡要解釋給定話語的含義，同時結(jié)合話語含義給出其要說明的觀點：經(jīng)驗的重要性。

2. 第二段首句明確表達自己的觀點：贊同經(jīng)驗很重要。

3. 以成功人士的經(jīng)驗為例，論述經(jīng)驗的重要性。

4. 以大學生為例，論述如何讓自己經(jīng)驗豐富，并提供切實可行的做法。

要點用法

be willing to do 樂意做

introspect v. 反省，內(nèi)省

worthwhile adj. 值得的

vocational adj. 職業(yè)的

workplace n. 工作場所

boost v. 促進；增加

appeal n. 吸引力；感染力

innate adj. 內(nèi)在的；固有的；先天的

unique edge 獨特的優(yōu)勢

contemporary n. 同時代的人

句法點評

1. They do know the importance of experience.

此句中用了“do+動詞原形”表示強調(diào)的結(jié)構，增加了句式的多樣性。

2. For my part, it is worthwhile for senior university students to spend some time acquiring experience in vocational and volunteer activities, which will provide us with the necessary workplace skills and experience, boost our appeal in the eyes of employers because the activities can build our strength of character and reveal an innate desire to work.