六級高分作文_令他人快樂，自己才會獲得快樂
令他人快樂，自己才會獲得快樂
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on being happy by referring to the saying “In order to make ourselves happy, we should learn how to make others happy first .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
審題立意
1. 導語解讀：要求考生根據(jù) “為了讓我們自己快樂，要先學會如何讓他人快樂”這句話，寫一篇關(guān)于“快樂”的文章，可以舉例說明。
2. 文章立意：首先，贈人玫瑰，手有余香。在給予他人快樂的時候，自己也會得到快樂。其次，一個人快樂，不如與大家一起快樂。再次，好心情是可以互相影響的，當他人快樂的時候，這種快樂情緒會影響到自己，使自己也變得快樂起來。讓我們努力做一個能給他人帶來快樂的人，因為，使他人快樂就是使自己快樂。
寫作思路
1. 第一段引用名言，直接點明主題。
2. 第二段通過理論和實例對主題進行論證。
3. 第三段呼應主題，以總結(jié)性的話語為文章畫上句號。
參考范文
Everybody wants to be happy, but how can people achieve happiness? The saying teaches us a good method, “In order to make ourselves happy, we should learn how to make others happy first.” 1
Why do we say so? To begin with 2 , while you give others happiness, you can get happiness yourself, which is an eternally immutable life philosophy. Next 2 , being happy together is better than being happy alone. Isn’t there a question in Mencius: “Which is more pleasant—to enjoy music alone, or to enjoy it with others?” The ancients knew the reason. So modern people should understand it even better. Finally 2 , good mood is infectious. While others feel happy, the good mood will affect you and make you happy. For example, if we smile to people we meet every morning, they will smile back. We will have a good mood the whole day.
Let’s try our best to be people who can bring others happiness for making others happy is making ourselves happy. 3
每個人都希望快樂，但是如何獲得快樂呢？有句名言告訴了我們一個好方法，那就是“為了讓我們自己快樂，要先學會如何讓他人快樂”。
為什么這么說呢？首先，在給予他人快樂的時候，自己也會得到快樂，這是亙古不變的人生哲理。其次，一個人快樂，不如與大家一起快樂?！睹献印芬粫胁皇怯小蔼殬窐罚c人樂樂，孰樂乎？”的問法嗎？古人尚且知道的道理，我們現(xiàn)代人更應該明白。最后，好心情是可以互相影響的，當他人快樂的時候，這種好心情會影響到自己，使自己也變得快樂起來。例如，如果每天早晨我們向遇到的人微笑，我們就會收獲他們回報的笑容。這樣我們整天都會擁有快樂的心情。
讓我們努力做一個能給他人帶來快樂的人吧，因為，使他人快樂就是使自己快樂。
范文點評
1. 開篇引用名言，點明主題。
2. 從三個角度，理論聯(lián)系實例對主題進行論證。
3. 尾段通過一句總結(jié)語，“使他人快樂就是使自己快樂”，深化了主題。
要點用法
eternally adv. 永恒地
immutable adj. 不變的
Mencius n. 《孟子》
infectious adj. 傳染的；傳染性的
句法點評
1. To begin with, while you give others happiness, you can get happiness yourself, which is an eternally immutable life philosophy.
此句是一個復合句，while引導時間狀語從句，主句為you can...，該復合句中還包含一個由which引導的非限制性定語從句。
2. Let’s try our best to be people who can bring others happiness for making others happy is making ourselves happy.
此句也是復合句，for引導原因狀語，主句為let引導的祈使句，主句中包含who引導的限制性定語從句，修飾先行詞people。
