Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Subway Ticket Price Increase . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words according to the following guidelines:
The subway ticket price in Beijing has been increased.
Some are in favor of it while others are against it.
What’s your opinion?
審題立意
1. 導(dǎo)語(yǔ)解讀：要求考生根據(jù)提供的線索就“地鐵票價(jià)上漲”這一話題進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)述，并提出自己的看法。
2. 文章立意：現(xiàn)有的地鐵價(jià)格體系因票價(jià)過(guò)低迫使政府不得不大量補(bǔ)貼，同時(shí)導(dǎo)致地鐵人滿為患，因此北京市政府實(shí)施了票價(jià)上漲政策，對(duì)此，有人贊成，有人反對(duì)，我認(rèn)為用多變的票價(jià)來(lái)解決問(wèn)題是可行的。
寫作思路
1. 第一段簡(jiǎn)要描述政府出臺(tái)了提升地鐵票價(jià)的政策以削減補(bǔ)貼。
2. 第二段通過(guò)對(duì)比論證的方式闡述支持方和反對(duì)方對(duì)于地鐵漲價(jià)的不同觀點(diǎn)。
3. 第三段提出我的個(gè)人看法并加以論證。
參考范文
On Subway Ticket Price Increase
The Beijing municipal govern-ment has reformed the current low-cost subway ticket system and increased ticket price in order to cut the overall cost of transport subsidies in the city. 1
Such a policy has led to a heated debate, with some supporting the policy, while others say it would be counterproductive. 2 People in favor of the policy said that the reform should be carried out because proper increase of the subway ticket price can ease the great transportation pressure to some extent. 3 However, people against the policy said that rising fares is undesirable because it raises people’s living cost. They said the government should provide other social welfare services to the public, if not, the government should not abandon the subsidy policy. Besides, low subway ticket price can encourage green travel. 3
From my perspective, variable ticket pricing as a solution is feasible. 4 The subway charges passengers according to the lengths of trips. In that way, it is effective to make cuts in the subsidies with proper subway ticket price while Beijing’s public transport system still sees a large number of passengers.
關(guān)于地鐵票價(jià)上漲
北京市政府就目前地鐵票務(wù)系統(tǒng)低價(jià)情況進(jìn)行了改革，提升了票價(jià)，以全面削減城市交通運(yùn)輸補(bǔ)貼。
此舉激起熱烈的辯論，有人支持這一舉措，也有人覺得這會(huì)事與愿違。贊成此舉的人認(rèn)為應(yīng)該實(shí)行這項(xiàng)改革，因?yàn)檫m當(dāng)?shù)靥岣叩罔F票價(jià)可以在一定程度上緩解巨大的交通壓力。然而，持反對(duì)意見的人則表示價(jià)格上漲不是個(gè)好事，因?yàn)檫@樣做增加了人們的生活成本。他們表示政府應(yīng)該向公眾提供其他的社會(huì)福利，否則，政府就不應(yīng)該拋棄地鐵補(bǔ)貼政策。另外，地鐵低價(jià)可以鼓勵(lì)綠色出行。
在我看來(lái)，用多變的票價(jià)來(lái)解決問(wèn)題是可行的。地鐵按里程收費(fèi)。這樣，合理的地鐵票價(jià)既能有效削減政府補(bǔ)貼，又能讓很多乘客依舊使用北京公共交通。
范文點(diǎn)評(píng)
1. 開篇簡(jiǎn)要描述北京市政府改革現(xiàn)有地鐵票務(wù)體系，提升了票價(jià)。
2. 自然過(guò)渡，引出提價(jià)這一話題激起人們熱烈討論，有人支持，有人反對(duì)，緊扣作文話題。
3. 分兩個(gè)層次、采用對(duì)比論證論述話題，恰如其分，條理清晰，同時(shí)也體現(xiàn)了論證方法的多樣性。
4. 末段首句明確表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)：用多變的票價(jià)來(lái)解決問(wèn)題是可行的。
要點(diǎn)用法
municipal adj. 市政的，市的
subsidy n. 補(bǔ)貼，補(bǔ)助金
counterproductive adj. 適得其反的，反作用的
in favor of 支持，贊同
rising fares 價(jià)格上漲
welfare n. 福利
green travel 綠色出行
variable adj. 多變的
句法點(diǎn)評(píng)
1. Such a policy has led to a heated debate, with some cheering the policy, while others say it would be counterproductive.
這里提到某一話題引起人們熱烈的爭(zhēng)論，有人支持，有人反對(duì)。這是正反觀點(diǎn)的論述文常用的句式。
2. The subway charges passengers according to the length of the trip.
句中使用了很有用的表達(dá)according to（根據(jù)，依據(jù)），表示方式或條件。
