六級高分作文_緩解交通壓力的舉措
緩解交通壓力的舉措
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Measures to Alleviate the Traffic Pressure . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words according to the following guidelines:
The rapid expansion of cities has caused numerous problems. Urban traffic pressure has perplexed citizens of most cities.
In order to alleviate the increasing traffic pressure, we should take such measures as...
審題立意
1. 導(dǎo)語解讀：要求考生根據(jù)提綱的內(nèi)容就“緩解交通壓力的舉措”這一話題展開論述。
2. 文章立意：當(dāng)今社會，隨著城市化進(jìn)程的加快，城市交通擁擠問題已成為擺在政府面前一個亟待解決的重大問題。如果能有效采取一些措施，交通壓力問題并非不可解決。
寫作思路
1. 第一段簡要描述提綱，然后指出客觀事實：交通壓力問題日趨嚴(yán)重。
2. 第二段通過舉例的方式闡述為解決交通擁堵應(yīng)采取的措施。
3. 第三段呼應(yīng)段首論點，再次強(qiáng)調(diào)交通擁堵問題的嚴(yán)重性，呼吁全社會的高度重視。
參考范文
In recent years, traffic jam has become one of the growing concerns for the residents of most urban areas. Heavy transportation pressure in large cities may bring much inconvenience to people and even severely disturb our normal life. At the same time, it may exert negative impact on the environment. 1 How to relieve the headache? The following measures may be effective. 2
Firstly 3 , the government should adopt such policies as raising taxes on the purchase of private cars and allowing one family to buy at most one car, so as to limit the amount of private cars. Secondly 3 , construction of public transportation such as buses and subways should be accelerated so that citizens find it more convenient and faster to take public transport than driving cars. Meanwhile 3 , flexible working hours can be introduced, so that people can stagger the rush hours.
In a word, more than ever before, heavy traffic has become a source of headache for both the urban population and the city authorities. Serious as it is, traffic pressure can be alleviated sooner or later if the government can take the above effective measures and the public can pay more attention to their living environment. 4
近年來，交通擁堵已成為很多城市居民越來越擔(dān)憂的問題之一。大城市的巨大交通壓力可能給人們帶來極大不便，甚至嚴(yán)重影響到我們的正常生活。同時，它也會對環(huán)境造成負(fù)面影響。如何緩解交通壓力？如下措施或許奏效。
首先，政府應(yīng)采取一些政策限制私家車的購買，比如增加購買私家車的稅收，一個家庭只允許購買一輛私家車等。其次，還應(yīng)加速諸如公共汽車和地鐵等公共交通的建設(shè)，以使市民覺得乘坐公共交通出行比駕駛私家車出行更為方便和快捷。此外，可以采取靈活工作時間，這樣人們就可以錯開高峰期上下班。
總之，交通壓力巨大已成為城市居民和政府越來越頭疼的問題。盡管形勢嚴(yán)峻，如果政府能采取以上有效措施，公眾能更加關(guān)注自身的生存環(huán)境，交通壓力遲早能得到緩解。
范文點評
1. 開篇描述提綱的內(nèi)容，指出客觀事實。
2. 自然過渡，引出緩解交通壓力的舉措，緊扣作文話題。
3. 分點論述，條理清晰，論證有力。
4. 末段總結(jié)全文，呼吁政府和公眾共同應(yīng)對交通壓力問題。
要點用法
exert v. 施加，產(chǎn)生
relieve v. 緩解
accelerate v. 加速
flexible adj. 靈活的
stagger v. 錯開
alleviate v. 減輕，緩和
句法點評
1. Firstly, the government should adopt such policies as raising taxes on the purchase of private cars and allowing one family to buy at most one car, so as to limit the amount of private cars.
這句話中使用了such...as...這個結(jié)構(gòu)，表示“像……這樣的”或“諸如……之類的”，as后可接名詞、動名詞或從句。
2. In a word, more than ever before, heavy traffic has become a source of headache for both the urban population and the city authorities.
in a word是表示總結(jié)的常用表達(dá)，意為“總之”；more than ever before意為“比以往任何時候更……”，用在此處表示強(qiáng)調(diào)。
