六級(jí)高分作文_向外國同學(xué)介紹中國春節(jié)習(xí)俗

　向外國同學(xué)介紹中國春節(jié)習(xí)俗

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the following situation. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

Suppose you have a new foreign classmate who is not so familiar with Chinese culture and customs. This year, you are going to invite him or her to your home to spend the Spring Festival with you and your family. Write him or her an invitation letter and introduce the traditional Chinese Spring Festival.

審題立意

1. 導(dǎo)語解讀：要求考生根據(jù)情景內(nèi)容就“向外國同學(xué)介紹中國春節(jié)習(xí)俗”這一話題進(jìn)行寫作，并解釋邀請(qǐng)同學(xué)一起歡度春節(jié)的原因以及過春節(jié)舉行的活動(dòng)。

2. 情景解讀：假設(shè)你的一位來自海外的同學(xué)對(duì)中國的文化習(xí)俗不盡了解，你打算邀請(qǐng)他今年同你一起過春節(jié)并向他介紹中國人過春節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗。

3. 文章立意：向同學(xué)發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)，簡(jiǎn)述春節(jié)對(duì)于中國人的重大意義以及體驗(yàn)中國傳統(tǒng)文化習(xí)俗的具體方式。

寫作思路

1. 第一段點(diǎn)出寫信目的——真誠地向同學(xué)發(fā)出來家里過春節(jié)的邀請(qǐng)。

2. 第二段表達(dá)春節(jié)對(duì)于中國人的特殊含義，慶祝春節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)方式以及如何更充分地體驗(yàn)中國的傳統(tǒng)文化習(xí)俗。

3. 第三段介紹請(qǐng)對(duì)方盡快確認(rèn)是否愿意接受邀請(qǐng)。

參考范文

Dec. 25th, 2015 1

Dear Paul, 1

I’m writing to 2 invite you to spend the Spring Festival with my family and me, since the Chinese Spring Festival is around the corner.

The Spring Festival to Chinese is as significant as Christmas is to Westerners. 3 Chinese people attach such great importance to the holiday for it has a long and rich history. It is on this very occasion that people pleasantly gather together with their families and friends to share happiness with each other and pray for the good luck in the coming year as well. If you could come, you would experience a lot of events in which Chinese celebrate this grand festival, such as posting spring couplets, making dumplings, setting off firecrackers, making a New Year wish and so on. You would be immersed in a joyous atmosphere. 3 Time permitting, I will be very glad to take you to some famous places of historic interest as well as the streets and alleyways to gain a deep insight into Chinese traditional cultures and customs. 3

I would appreciate it if you could confirm your visit at your earliest convenience. 4

Yours truthfully 1 ,

Linda 1

親愛的保羅，

春節(jié)即將來到，此番去函是邀請(qǐng)你與我及我的家人共度春節(jié)。

春節(jié)對(duì)于中國人就如同圣誕節(jié)對(duì)于西方人一樣具有重大意義。因?yàn)榇汗?jié)有著悠久的歷史，所以中國人非常重視它。春節(jié)就是一個(gè)與親朋歡聚一堂，分享快樂，共同為來年祈福的特殊節(jié)日。如果你能來，你將親歷中國人慶祝這個(gè)盛大節(jié)日的諸多活動(dòng)，比如貼春聯(lián)、包餃子、放鞭炮、拜年等。你將沉浸在一片歡樂的氣氛中。若時(shí)間允許，我將十分樂意帶你去觀光一些名勝古跡，逛遍大街小巷。這會(huì)讓你更深入地了解中國的傳統(tǒng)文化習(xí)俗。

如果你方便盡快確認(rèn)接受邀請(qǐng)，我將不勝感激。

你真誠的琳達(dá)

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范文點(diǎn)評(píng)

1. 符合信函寫作所涵蓋的基本內(nèi)容：日期、稱呼、正文、結(jié)束語、簽名。

2. 首段點(diǎn)出寫信目的，真誠邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方來家共度春節(jié)，緊扣作文話題。

3. 分層次介紹春節(jié)對(duì)中國人的重要意義，并自然過渡到體驗(yàn)傳統(tǒng)文化習(xí)俗的各種方式，解釋發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)的原因。

4. 末段婉轉(zhuǎn)表達(dá)自己希望對(duì)方及時(shí)給予確認(rèn)回復(fù)的需求。

要點(diǎn)用法

be around the corner 即將來到

attach importance to 重視

spring couplets 春聯(lián)

set off 使爆炸；出發(fā)

be immersed in 沉浸在……

places of historic interest 歷史古跡

the streets and alleyways 大街小巷

take a deep insight into 深入了解，洞察

confirm v. 確認(rèn)

句法點(diǎn)評(píng)

1. The Spring Festival to Chinese is as significant as Christmas is to Westerners.

這句話中使用了一個(gè)比較句，結(jié)構(gòu)如下：事物A + 謂語 + as + adj. / adv. + as + 事物B。

2. It is on this very occasion that people pleasantly gather together with their families and friends to share happiness with each other and pray for the good luck in the coming year as well.

這是一個(gè)強(qiáng)調(diào)句，被強(qiáng)調(diào)的成分是on this very occasion。 陳述句的強(qiáng)調(diào)句型：It is / was + 被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分（通常是主語、賓語或狀語）+ that / who（當(dāng)強(qiáng)調(diào)主語且主語指人）+ 其他部分。例如：It was at the railway station that I met Li Ming yesterday.