六級高分作文_家庭和媒體對孩子的影響孰輕孰重?
家庭和媒體對孩子的影響孰輕孰重?
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on influences of media and family on children according to the following instruction. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
Some think a family has a great influence on children’s development, but others believe that the media is a bigger influence. Discuss the two views and give your opinions.
審題立意
1. 導(dǎo)語解讀：要求考生根據(jù)情景內(nèi)容就“家庭和媒體對孩子的影響”這一話題進(jìn)行簡述。
2. 情景解讀：有人認(rèn)為家庭對孩子影響很大，然而另一部分人認(rèn)為媒體對孩子的影響更大。簡述他們各自的觀點(diǎn)并說說自己的看法。
3. 文章立意：各種大眾媒體隨處可見，這使得孩子可以隨時隨地通過它們獲取大量信息，從而形成自己對世界的看法，而家庭對于孩子的性格、世界觀以及行為方式更是有著潛移默化的影響。家庭對孩子成長的影響是媒體所不能替代的。
寫作思路
1. 第一段簡要描述現(xiàn)象，指出“家庭和媒體對孩子的影響孰輕孰重”這一話題已經(jīng)引起廣泛熱議。
2. 第二段通過舉例的方式就家庭和媒體各自對孩子產(chǎn)生的影響展開討論。
3. 第三段呼應(yīng)主題，介紹自己對這一問題的看法并剖析原因。
參考范文
Children’s growth is always accompanied by their family, but nowadays the media plays a more and more important role in their daily life. 1 Therefore, the topic on which of them influences children more greatly sparks a heated debate. 2
Some think a family has a subtle influence on children’s personality, the outlook on life and the way of doing things because of the kinship and domestic intercourse. 3 But others believe that the media is a bigger influence on the three aspects above because the mass media are more frequently exposed to children in their daily life, such as newspaper, broadcast, TV shows, and Internet, which provide almost all kinds of information. 3
As far as I am concerned 4 , I would like to take the side of the former for two more reasons. One 4 is that parents help children with refining what is real and valuable from the tremendous amount of information from the mass media. The second 4 is that compared with the mass media, face-to-face communication proved to be the most direct and efficient way of promoting emotions of children. Thus, family can influence the children in the way that media cannot. 4
孩子的成長總是伴隨著家人，而現(xiàn)如今媒體在他們的日常生活中也扮演著越來越重要的角色。因此，有關(guān)兩者中哪一個對孩子的影響更大的話題引發(fā)了人們的熱議。
因?yàn)檠壍年P(guān)系和家庭成員之間的往來，一些人認(rèn)為家庭對孩子的性格、人生觀以及處事方式有著潛移默化的影響。然而另一部分人認(rèn)為媒體在上述三個方面對孩子的影響更大，因?yàn)楹⒆釉谒麄兊娜粘Ｉ钪袝l繁地接觸大眾媒體（如報紙、廣播、電視節(jié)目和網(wǎng)絡(luò)等），這些媒介幾乎可以提供所有的信息。
就我個人的觀點(diǎn)而言，我更傾向于前者。除上述原因以外還有兩點(diǎn)：一是家長可以幫助孩子從大眾媒體提供的海量信息中提煉真實(shí)和有價值的東西。二是與大眾媒體相比，家庭成員之間的面對面的溝通被證明是促進(jìn)孩子感情發(fā)展的最直接和最有效的方式。因此，家庭可以用一種媒體無法做到的方式來影響孩子。
范文點(diǎn)評
1. 開篇引出家庭和媒體對孩子的成長有影響的話題。
2. 自然過渡到作文話題。
3. 就情景中的兩種對立觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行闡述。
4. 末段道出個人觀點(diǎn)，層次鮮明，理由充分。
要點(diǎn)用法
be accompanied by 在……陪同下
spark v. 激發(fā)
subtle adj. 微妙的
kinship n. 親屬關(guān)系
domestic adj. 家庭的
intercourse n. 交際，往來
be exposed to 暴露于
take the side of 支持
refine v. 提煉
tremendous 相當(dāng)多的
句法點(diǎn)評
1. One is that parents help children with refining what is real and valuable from the tremendous amount of information from the mass media.
這句話中包含了一個由that引導(dǎo)的表語從句和一個由what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。
2. The second is that compared with the mass media, face-to-face communication proved to be the most direct and efficient way of promoting emotions of children.
這句話中使用了非謂語動詞作狀語的結(jié)構(gòu)?！癱ompare”與句子主語“face-to-face communication”是被動關(guān)系，所以用過去分詞形式。
