話題二十：家庭教育與生活 Writing 1 高考英語(yǔ)高分范文1

Writing 1 　假如你校最近就“家長(zhǎng)應(yīng)該如何對(duì)待孩子”的問(wèn)題進(jìn)行了調(diào)查，結(jié)果如下：請(qǐng)根據(jù)表1中的信息描述調(diào)查結(jié)果，并針對(duì)表2的其中一個(gè)數(shù)據(jù)所反映的情況寫(xiě)出你的看法。

表1　我最喜歡父母對(duì)待我的3種行為 表2　我最不滿意父母對(duì)待我的3種行為

高分范文1

Recently，a survey on how parents treat their children has been conducted in our school．According to the result，it's not surprising to find that parents' behavior that students like best is trust with 33.5%，followed by talking freely and praise with 31.7% and 22.7% respectively．On the contrary，students are not satisfied with their parents because they are over concerned about children，which ranks first with 37.6%．Always blaming the children and expecting too much of them are the other two main behaviors children dislike．

From my perspective，I can understand youngsters' feelings，especially when parents take charge of all things．Admittedly，parents are not willing to let us alone for fear that we are hurt or lost in trouble．However，as we can see from the data，what students want most is trust．If parents trust us completely，they won't restrict our freedom to decide important matters．Therefore，we will pick up the courage to face various difficulties and be grateful to our parents' faith in us．Furthermore，no matter how careful parents can be，little birds will fly independently one day．It is the repeated warnings and over concern that prevent us from growing mature．Last but not least，the fact that students under the charge of their parents may deepen the generation gap even if the original intention is not like this．Never will children understand parents' love when they get tired of their unnecessary worries．

In conclusion，I suggest that parents should spare some room for children，thus giving them opportunities to be independent and strengthening the relationship between them.