2018年江蘇卷
書面表達(滿分25分)
請閱讀下面文字,并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。
【寫作內容】
1.用約30個詞概括上述利用排名( ratings)進行消費的現(xiàn)象;
2.談談你如何看待消費排名,然后用2-3個理由或論據支撐你的看法。
【寫作要求】
1.寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句;
2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱;
3.不必寫標題
【評分標準】
內容完整,語言規(guī)范,語篇連貫,詞數適當。
【滿分范文】
Possible version two:
Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certainchannels. These ratings, easy to access,are playing an increasingly important role in customers' purchase decision.However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.
There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience toconsumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable. As we all know, mostof the ratings are based on others’ judgment on the product or serviceconcerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychologicalstate. Apparently, blindly following others' advice will affect our ownjudgment. Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are theoutcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become acommon practice for some to pay
for good ratings on their products orservices so as to increase their sales.
Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we goshopping.
可能的版本2:
如今,大多數商品或服務都是通過一定的渠道進行評級的。這些易于獲取的評級在消費者的購買決策中扮演著越來越重要的角色。然而,結果有時并不令人滿意。
不可否認,這樣的評級給消費者帶來了便利,但往往具有誤導性和不可靠。我們都知道,大多數的評級是基于他人對相關產品或服務的判斷。每一個判斷都來自于一種特定的需求或一種獨特的心理狀態(tài)。顯然,盲目聽從別人的建議會影響我們自己的判斷。另一個不應被忽視的事實是,一些評級是公司或賣方精心操縱的結果。對一些人來說,付費已經成為一種慣例
對他們的產品或服務的良好評價,以增加他們的銷售。
因此,我們在購物時應該重新考慮這些評級。