高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文:2019年浙江卷2

2019年浙江卷

第二節(jié) 概要寫作 (滿分25分)

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Parents everywhere praise their kids. JennBerman, author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids, says,"We've gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parentstended to be more strict." By giving kids a lot of praise, parents thinkthey're building their children's confidence, when, in fact, it may be just theopposite. Too much praise can backfire and, when given in a way that'sinsincere, make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of notbeing able to stay on top where their parents' praise has put them.

Still, don't go too far in the otherdirection. Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging gas giving toomuch. Kids will feel like they're not good enough or that you don't care and,as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.

So what is the right amount of praise?Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity. Ifpraise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it asoften as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward." Weshould especially recognize our children's efforts to push themselves and workhard to achieve a goal, "says Donahue, author of Parenting Without Fear:Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters. "One thing toremember is that it's the process not the end product that matters."

Your son may not be the best basketballplayer on his team. But if he's out there every day and playing hard, youshould praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. Praisingthe effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when shehas worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. Butwhatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and beproportionate(相稱的)to the amount of effort your child has put into it.

各地的父母都稱贊自己的孩子。

《培養(yǎng)快樂(lè)自信的孩子A到Z指南》(The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids)一書的作者簡(jiǎn)·伯曼(JennBerman)說(shuō):“我們已經(jīng)走到了幾十年前的另一個(gè)極端，那時(shí)父母往往更加嚴(yán)格?！?/p>

通過(guò)給孩子很多表?yè)P(yáng)，父母認(rèn)為他們建立了孩子的信心，但事實(shí)上，可能恰恰相反。

過(guò)多的表?yè)P(yáng)可能會(huì)適得其反，而且如果給予的方式不真誠(chéng)，孩子們會(huì)因?yàn)閾?dān)心不能在父母的表?yè)P(yáng)中保持領(lǐng)先地位而不敢嘗試新事物或冒險(xiǎn)。

不過(guò)，別在另一個(gè)方向走得太遠(yuǎn)。

不給予足夠的贊揚(yáng)就像給予過(guò)多的有害氣體一樣。

孩子們會(huì)覺(jué)得他們不夠好，或者你不關(guān)心他們，因此，他們可能會(huì)覺(jué)得為他們的成就努力沒(méi)有意義。

那么贊美的恰當(dāng)量是多少呢?

專家說(shuō)，贊美的質(zhì)量比數(shù)量更重要。

如果表?yè)P(yáng)是真誠(chéng)的，并且關(guān)注的是努力而不是結(jié)果，當(dāng)你的孩子做了一些值得口頭獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)的事情時(shí)，你就可以給予表?yè)P(yáng)?！?/p>

我們尤其應(yīng)該認(rèn)識(shí)到孩子們?yōu)榱藢?shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)而努力推動(dòng)自己的努力，”多納休說(shuō)，他是《無(wú)所畏懼的父母:放下憂慮，專注于真正重要的事情》一書的作者。

“要記住的一點(diǎn)是，重要的是過(guò)程，而不是最終產(chǎn)品?！?/p>

你兒子可能不是隊(duì)里最好的籃球運(yùn)動(dòng)員。

但是如果他每天都在球場(chǎng)上努力打球，不管他的球隊(duì)是贏是輸，你都應(yīng)該表?yè)P(yáng)他的努力。

表?yè)P(yáng)孩子的努力而不是結(jié)果也意味著在她努力打掃院子、做飯或完成讀書報(bào)告時(shí)認(rèn)可她。

但不管它是什么,應(yīng)給予表?yè)P(yáng)在個(gè)案基礎(chǔ)上,適當(dāng)?shù)?相稱的)的工作量你孩子。

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【范文】

Currently, contrary to what people did inthe past, many parents think highly of their kids too often. It is not properto praise children too much, but they can't do the opposite. It is said thatwhat matters is not the quantity but the quality of praise. All in all, parentsare supposed to praise their children in promotion to how much effort theymake.

現(xiàn)在，與過(guò)去人們所做的相反，許多父母過(guò)于看重他們的孩子。

過(guò)分表?yè)P(yáng)孩子是不恰當(dāng)?shù)?，但反過(guò)來(lái)也不能。

據(jù)說(shuō)，重要的不是贊美的數(shù)量，而是贊美的質(zhì)量。

總之，父母應(yīng)該表?yè)P(yáng)他們的孩子在促進(jìn)他們做了多少努力。