揭開(kāi)雅思寫(xiě)作流程圖的奧秘

　　各位烤鴨們好，時(shí)間過(guò)的飛快，眨眼間2016就剩下一點(diǎn)小尾巴了。回顧今年的考試，我們會(huì)驚訝地發(fā)現(xiàn)流程圖和地圖題的考試頻率和去年相比低了很多。根據(jù)平衡的原則，不排除會(huì)在年末出現(xiàn)流程圖和地圖題。所以，在今天的作文推送中，老師就帶大家來(lái)分析一篇最近考的流程圖。幫助大家揭開(kāi)其神秘的面紗。

　　題目

　　The diagrams below show the amount of energy lost in 100 units when it is generated from black coal and when it is generated from brown coal.

　　題目分析

　　相信很多烤鴨在拿到這到題目的時(shí)候肯定是大腦一片空白的。簡(jiǎn)單的幾個(gè)箭頭構(gòu)成的兩幅流程圖，過(guò)程都一模一樣，居然要寫(xiě)滿150個(gè)單詞。實(shí)際上，這幅流程圖的意思并不難理解，講解的是不同種類的煤礦在發(fā)電廠，運(yùn)輸和分配中的能源消耗情況，以及最后到消費(fèi)者中的手中剩余的能源情況。雖然過(guò)程簡(jiǎn)單，但是題目中出現(xiàn)了很多數(shù)據(jù)，這提醒烤鴨們一定要有定量的分析，也在一定程度上降低了字?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)標(biāo)的要求。

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　　The two diagrams present the information of energy loss in every 100 units fuel energy , from black coal and brown coal respectively.

　　分析：對(duì)題目進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單的同義改寫(xiě)。開(kāi)頭段保持精簡(jiǎn)的原則。不要進(jìn)行過(guò)多的句型轉(zhuǎn)化。

　　It can be seen from the first diagram that in the first stage where the brown coal is sent to the power station, there are 70 units energy wasted, accounting for a large proportion of the whole energy. In the following stage, transportation and distribution, a relatively marginal amount of energy is lost( 3 units), and the remainder is only 27 units when it is consumed by the consumers in the final step.

　　分析： 分析棕煤在運(yùn)輸?shù)倪^(guò)程中能源的消耗和變化情況。注意不同步驟之間的銜接手段的多樣性。題目中的in the following stage, in the final step都體現(xiàn)出了步驟。同時(shí)也要注意句型表達(dá)的多樣性。第一句話中用到了定語(yǔ)從句，there be句型和非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，句型很豐富。

　　The black coal, on the other hand, shows a similar energy loss pattern compared with its brown counterpart. When it is transported, the energy loss amounts to 68 units, which means more than half of its original energy is lost. In the stage of transportation and distribution, the same quantity of energy is wasted in comparison to the brown coal. The consumers, who will finally utilize the energy, can only share a small proportion of fuel energy.

　　分析： 這段話和上一段的思維邏輯是一模一樣的，就是按照步驟順序進(jìn)行描述，同時(shí)要注意數(shù)據(jù)的分析。最后，在句式上要注意多多變化。比如，這一段的一開(kāi)始通過(guò)一個(gè)插入語(yǔ)的方式將一個(gè)長(zhǎng)句子變成一個(gè)短句子，在節(jié)奏上聽(tīng)起來(lái)更加朗朗上口。

　　Overall, the black coal loses less energy than the brown coal and the second stage will cost most of the fuel energy.

　　分析： 最后一段進(jìn)行總體對(duì)比，得出在整個(gè)過(guò)程中黑煤的能源消耗更少。

　　結(jié)語(yǔ)

　　經(jīng)過(guò)簡(jiǎn)單的分析，相信烤鴨們對(duì)流程圖應(yīng)該沒(méi)有很大的畏難情緒了。只要平時(shí)在戰(zhàn)略上不忽視，然后在戰(zhàn)術(shù)上多多練習(xí)，肯定會(huì)跨過(guò)這道坎。