中國學生缺乏創(chuàng)造思維 雅思寫作高分長難句加分

　　其實，對于寫作論點方面，中國的學生普遍缺乏creative thinking，因此在邏輯微有瑕疵的前提下，如何拿到6.5或者7以上的高分呢?這就來源于你的語法結(jié)構(gòu) grammer range and accuarcy，如何寫好complex structure。也就引出我們今天的主題：

　　正確用長難句給大作文加分

　　1，長難句會加分么?

　　高分的寫作要求我們有語法的豐富度，也就是時態(tài)，語氣與語態(tài)的結(jié)合，除此之外還要有多變的句式結(jié)構(gòu)(復雜句加簡單句)

　　其中，復雜句是最能考驗一個學生語言功底的句子，正確的架構(gòu)一個長難句對于考官來說，無疑是一個高分亮點。

　　eg.Many schools are eager to hire experienced employees.(簡單句)

　　eg.Many schools are eager to hire employees who possess the organisational skills needed tocomplete the duties associated with teaching.(復雜句)

　　但這并不意味，所有的句子都得由長難句來完成，長難句是起到畫龍點睛之筆，偶爾也需要短句來調(diào)節(jié)考官的閱讀節(jié)奏。(要注意所有論點的提出只能用簡單句)

　　因此，可以負責任的說，長難句的存在對于作文分數(shù)的提高有著至關(guān)重要的作用。

　　2，長難句分為哪幾種?

　　是不是字數(shù)多就是長難句啊?

　　我是不是要把主語的頭弄大一點

　　萬一寫個長難句還有語法錯誤，還不如不寫了

　　沒有語法錯誤，全寫小短句我也可以拿高分吧嘿嘿

　　我敢肯定很多烤鴨都有以上掩耳盜鈴或者天真可愛的想法。但在這里需要指出的是，長難句區(qū)別于簡單句，即要有復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，而不僅僅是字數(shù)的限制。

　　所謂英文的復雜句，從本質(zhì)上來說不過就是兩個(或者兩個以上)簡單句和連詞的疊加。

　　基礎(chǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)為：

　　(連接詞)+主+謂+賓+(連接詞)+主+謂+(賓)

　　當然亦可以通過“嵌套”出更為復雜的復雜句，但一般高分作文的復雜句只含有一個主句和1~2個從句及少量短語，再輔以簡單句和并列句。

　　Take it easy,我們并沒有變態(tài)到到讓你寫出3、4個從句的長難句。

　　細分一下長難句的種類，可以主要分為以下幾種

　　1.主句+從句

　　例如：Some citizens take it for granted that environmental problems should be resolved by government alone without any personal effort.(用it作為形式賓語的賓語從句)

　　2.倒裝，強調(diào)或者虛擬

　　例如：(1)Strange as I may seem,parent's attention sometimes hinder student's academic performance in school.(倒裝)

　　(2)It is the interaction of the two that shapes a person's personality and dictates how that personality develops.(強調(diào))

　　(3)If sufficient sky train and underground train systems were built and effectively maintained in our major cities,then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced.(虛擬)

　　3.長句加短語的結(jié)合

　　例如：Persuading manufacturers and travellers to adopt this new technology would be effective stragegy for improving air quality,especially in cities.(動名詞作主語)

　　4.用連詞進行列舉

　　例如：Physical activity could be encouraged relatively cheaply,for exampleby installing exercise equipment in parks.

　　3怎么寫出正確的長難句

　　根據(jù)第二部分給出的長難句種類，

　　現(xiàn)在我們來仔細研究一下句子的主要框架結(jié)構(gòu)。

　　1.主句+從句

　　(1) 賓語從句：someone take it in account(認為)

　　someone take it into granted(認為什么理所當然)

　　it 作為形式賓語(高分用法)

　　(2)高端定語從句：及物動詞/介詞 +the extent to which+句子

　　eg.The government must consider the extent to which environmental problems can be resolved.

　　(3)主語從句：That+句子+makes it+adj+(for sb )to do sth /句子

　　eg.That the government invests more in arts,like music and painting makes it possible that the cities and town will become a more attractive place to live in.

　　(4)非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)：Given +名詞/ Given that+句子

　　eg.Given that most young couples are too occupied to cinsider having babies,it is therefore imperative that they put off their parenthood.

　　2.倒裝，強調(diào)或者虛擬

　　(1)倒裝：Only...can.../Not only...but also.../Be it...or(不管是...還是...)

　　(2)強調(diào)：It is...that.../It is...who(正是......導致了......)

　　(3)虛擬：If...were...,...would...(注意在虛擬語氣中，this和that后都要用were而不是was)

　　3.長句加短語的結(jié)合

　　例如在句子后面加入限定成分especially in citits/coutries/modern society, both in cities and on motorways, in this respect,ect.

　　eg.A person needs to fell that they are doing valued and valuable work,so positive feedback from superiors is very important in this respect.

　　4.用連詞進行擴展

　　例如用such as,for example,instead of,as well as 等等

　　eg.Being a celebrity—such as a famous film star or sports personality—brings problems as well asbenifit.

　　※in terms of(在......方面),for the sake of(為了改善......) ,regardless of(不管......) 其實也是復雜句的三大絕活。

　　例如：

　　(1)This children are often spoilt,not in terms of love and attention because working parents do not have time for this.

　　(2)......for the sake of their healty

　　(3) regardless of price