雅思寫作真題分析
本題其實(shí)也是要求烤鴨們論證,到底該不該對老建筑進(jìn)行重新修繕?因?yàn)橹匦蘩辖ㄖ枰ㄙM(fèi)很多錢,那么到底值不值得呢?這些錢是不是該用于建新的住房,或者新的道路呢?因此,這里還涉及一個小小的比較:到底老建筑重要,還是新的住房和道路更重要?
我們當(dāng)然可以這樣來論證本題:很多老的建筑物既危險,也影響城市面貌,因此完全沒有必要重修,可以拆除它們,而節(jié)約下來的錢用于改善我們現(xiàn)實(shí)的住房和道路條件;但也有很多建筑物具有歷史文化價值,是我們民族記憶的一部分,因此應(yīng)該保留,花再多錢修繕都是值得的。這是兩邊論證的思路。
我們也可以這樣來論證:老建筑物雖然有價值,但畢竟只是與生活無關(guān)的價值。我們現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中需要更好的住房條件和道路條件,這樣才能使城市居民生活更幸福,更和諧。因此,用于修繕老建筑物的錢完全應(yīng)該用于改善住房和道路條件。這是一邊倒論證的思路。
本范文采取兩邊論證的結(jié)構(gòu)。
雅思寫作真題7分范文
Every city has old buildings. Every year the governments around the world spend large sums of money restoring them. Some people consider this a huge waste of money and they believe the governments’ budget should go to building new houses and roads, while others insist that the restoration of old buildings in cities is well worth the money.
There are a host of reasons why some urban old buildings should not be restored. To start with, the old buildings are no longer suitable for people to live in, therefore they should be destroyed and give way to new buildings so that people, especially young people in the cities have more living spaces. Secondly, the old buildings can cause inconveniences for the city dwellers. Since there is not a direct route through the old buildings, people sometimes have to go to and off work by making a long detour around them, and in this way much of their time is wasted. Finally, the old buildings may give rise to safety problems. More than 100 people, for example, are killed or injured each year in my city, just because of the collapse of some ancient buildings.
Yet old buildings - at least some of them - are significant historically and culturally, and hence should be restored for that reason. They carry some important messages about the city or even the whole nation. The Summer Palace, for instance, is a perfect reminder of how the imperial family in the Qing Dynasty in feudal China were living and so has great cultural significance. Such old buildings, if well preserved, can become tourist spots and attract thousands of visitors from around the globe.
We all need a memory of our past. Many old buildings do have historical and cultural value which tells us who we were. We need to take good care of these buildings and keep them as long as possible, however much money it may involve, so that they can tell the stories of the city or the nation to our future generations. Of course, the money squandered on those old buildings with little value should be used to solve more practical problems such as housing and traffic. (366 words)
雅思寫作高分語料
Large sums of money 大量的錢
A huge waste of money 錢的極大浪費(fèi)
Be well worth... 完全值得......
A host of reasons 眾多理由
Give way to... 讓位給......
City dwellers 城市居民
Make a detour 繞道
Give rise to... 產(chǎn)生......
Reminders 提醒物
Imperial 帝王的
Around the globe 全球
Involve 涉及;包含
Squander 浪費(fèi)