雅思大作文議論文高分范文解析：網(wǎng)絡(luò)話題

　　TheInternet has as many disadvantages as it does advantages.

　　Towhat extent do you agree with this statement?

　　Key words analysis

　　disadvantage: 缺點(diǎn)，同義詞有shortage, weakness

　　advantage: 優(yōu)點(diǎn)，同義詞有benefit, strong point 同義

　　Argument:

　　這是屬于議論文中的argument類型，通常會在agree或disagree之間進(jìn)行選擇。但是該題特別提到說to what extent do you agree or disagree，那么我們最好是能夠討論到這個(gè)事件的兩個(gè)方面，然后給出自己的意見。

　　Possible reasons:

　　互聯(lián)網(wǎng)使得人們的交流更加方便

　　互聯(lián)網(wǎng)使人們更容易的獲取信息

　　互聯(lián)網(wǎng)也會導(dǎo)致人們變得懶惰

　　Model Essay 1 – Part 1

　　Introduction

　　Since its development in the 1970s, theInternet has become a key tool for obtaining information and for communicationall over the world. The Internet has both advantages and disadvantages but.overall, I believe the advantages are stronger than the disadvantages..

　　Main body 1

　　Firstly, the Internet has made work andsocial life much easier. Sending emails and using video conferencing in theworkplace have made business quicker and more efficient. For example, in thepast, people often had to travel long distances for meetings and now they canvideo call instead. Also, the Internet makes it easier to keep in contact withfamily and friends through email and social networking websites. People cangive friends and relatives their news quickly and easily. In addition,meetings, parties and social events for large groups of people are easier toorganize in this way. Finally, finding out information online is much quickerthan visiting libraries or making expensive phone calls.

　　Model Essay 1 – Part 2

　　Main body 2

　　On the other hand, people claim theInternet has disadvantages. Some people say that the Internet makes peoplelazy. For example people now do lots of things online, like shopping andsocializing, when it might be better for them to do these things in the “real”world. Furthermore, the Internet contains a lot of information which is notcorrect. This is because anyone can put anything they want on the Internet andit is not always checked for accuracy or truth. Users need to be sure that thewebsites they look at are reliable sources of information.

　　Conclusion

　　In conclusion, although it has advantagesand disadvantages, the Internet has made life so much easier in so many ways,that, as long as people know how to use it effectively, it can be an excellenttool.