雅思寫(xiě)作考試論題講解：健康是否對(duì)個(gè)人有益

 

　　健康類：

　　Staying healthy by playing sports and eating well should be an individual’s duty to society rather than a habit for personal benefits. Do you agree or disagree? 保持健康是個(gè)人對(duì)于社會(huì)的責(zé)任，但是，不是使個(gè)人受益的良好習(xí)慣，是否認(rèn)同?

　　作家立場(chǎng)：個(gè)人保持健康即是對(duì)于社會(huì)的責(zé)任，更是對(duì)于個(gè)人有益。

　　謀篇布局：讓步反駁

　　思路拓展：

　　讓步段：保持健康為何是盡到了社會(huì)責(zé)任

　　1. 個(gè)人保持身體健康是個(gè)人履行社會(huì)責(zé)任的體現(xiàn)，因?yàn)閭€(gè)人減少了對(duì)于國(guó)家醫(yī)療資源的消耗。

　　2. 個(gè)人保持心理健康是個(gè)人履行社會(huì)責(zé)任的體現(xiàn)，因?yàn)閭€(gè)人較少做出反社會(huì)行為。

　　反駁段：保持健康為何是良好的個(gè)人習(xí)慣，對(duì)于個(gè)人有利

　　1. 對(duì)于個(gè)人的利好：增加自信，減少憂慮，人生態(tài)度更加積極樂(lè)觀。通過(guò)運(yùn)動(dòng)可以結(jié)實(shí)好友，這就意味著快樂(lè)的源泉更多。

　　2. 對(duì)于家庭的利好：可以想象，個(gè)人健康狀況令人擔(dān)憂，家人必然痛苦和擔(dān)憂(例如企業(yè)家和文體明星)，因此個(gè)人健康可以樂(lè)觀地實(shí)現(xiàn)家庭的和諧。

　　3. 對(duì)于事業(yè)和學(xué)業(yè)的利好：個(gè)人健康可以提高學(xué)習(xí)效率，使人精力充沛地實(shí)現(xiàn)事業(yè)的挑戰(zhàn)。

　　原創(chuàng)語(yǔ)料庫(kù)：

　　1. keep fit = keep wholesome = remains healthy 保持健康

　　2. Happiness, lies, first of all, in health 健康是幸福人生的本源。

　　3. Health could, to large extent, empower one to face up to career challenges enthusiastically and harmonize family life optimistically. 健康在很大程度上使人精力充沛地應(yīng)對(duì)事業(yè)的挑戰(zhàn)以及樂(lè)觀地實(shí)現(xiàn)家庭的和諧。

　　4. ……instill confidence into one’s heart 增強(qiáng)人的自信

　　拓展： indoctrinate self-confidence into one’s heart 增強(qiáng)人的自信

　　5. to see the sunny side 積極樂(lè)觀

　　拓展：be resilient = to be positive = be optimistic 很樂(lè)觀

　　6. strengthens the immune system 增強(qiáng)免疫系統(tǒng)

　　7. A healthy people succeed better at work，respond better to stress, suffer fewer depressive moods and achieve more personal goals 健康者工作更有成效，積極應(yīng)對(duì)壓力，較少沮喪，可以實(shí)現(xiàn)更多個(gè)人目標(biāo)。

　　點(diǎn)評(píng)：健康對(duì)于個(gè)人利好的細(xì)節(jié)展開(kāi)。

　　拓展：healthy = sound = wholesome 健康的

　　8. Many elite entrepreneurs or super stars usually suffer from various health-related problems due to excessive workload and huge mental pressure. 很多企業(yè)家和明星，由于工作和精神的壓力，健康狀況令人堪憂。

　　9. It is conceivable that one’s poor health condition will inevitably bring a sea of agonies to the family members 可以想象，個(gè)人不健康，會(huì)給家人帶來(lái)巨大的痛苦。

　　10. As for the country，the increased proportion of wholesome citizens could greatly diminish the financial investment in the public medical treatment. 對(duì)于國(guó)家而言，健康公民的數(shù)量增加，公共醫(yī)療資金減少。

　　原創(chuàng)句型拓展語(yǔ)料庫(kù)：

　　1. Every individual could benefit a great deal from …… in many respects 個(gè)人在很多方面可以從……收益良多

　　拓展：in many respects = in many aspects = in more ways than one 在很多方面

　　2. Everybody could become the beneficiary of …… 人人都是……的受益者

　　3. It is rather superficial to simply believe that …… 簡(jiǎn)單認(rèn)為……是相當(dāng)膚淺的

　　4. Maintaining personal health could not only serve the good of the community，but importantly，conduce to individual life, family harmony and career prosperity. 保持個(gè)人健康不僅僅對(duì)于社會(huì)有益，更加重要的是， 健康有助于個(gè)人幸福，家庭和睦，事業(yè)輝煌。

　　點(diǎn)評(píng)：主題句亮明作家立場(chǎng)

　　5. Keeping fit is not only related to social responsibility but also links to personal happiness, which is more significant 保持健康不僅僅是個(gè)人的社會(huì)責(zé)任，更加與個(gè)人幸福相關(guān)，健康對(duì)于個(gè)人的意義更大。