2015年6月英語四級真題作文及范文：母女對話

破題思路：

第一段：漫畫描述，重點是母女之間的對話內(nèi)容，從而引出文章的主題是有關(guān)孩子的獨立性，家長干涉孩子過多。

第二段：可以分析此現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因。

第三段：采取措施解決此現(xiàn)象。

How impressive the cartoon is in describing the most widespread social phenomenon concerning the independence of the children. Let’s take a closer look at the drawing, the girl told her mother she was accepted by the university of her mother’s choice with pride. The author’s real purpose is not the drawing itself, but to lead us to secure what hides behind the picture. What are the reasons for it? In the following sentences, I’ll venture to explore the reasons. To start with, the only-one child policy in China has made more and more parents pay much attention to their children that they would like to replace their children to do everything. In addition, parents don’t believe that their children have enough ability to deal with their personal matters and make any decisions. There are some suggestions given to our parents. For one thing, it is quite important for our parents to realize that their children will grow up and have their own ideas as time goes by. For another, children should be encouraged to make some decisions alone so that they are able to pursue what they really want. I contend that our parents should give their children a free hand in some matters to help them to be independent。

網(wǎng)友版（2）

As is graphically depicted in the cartoon, a young girl is talking with her mother. She says ironically, “Good news mom! I was accepted to the college of your choice!” Then, her mother smiles and seems content with this result. Apparently, the cartoon aims to reveal the fact that a majority of modern parents play an increasingly negative role in their children’s growth.

第一段三句話，描寫圖中大體現(xiàn)象、細(xì)節(jié)描寫對話內(nèi)容和人物反應(yīng)、揭示圖畫的目的。

There are several possible reasons accountable for this phenomenon(中心句). To begin with, family in growing numbers has only one child; therefore, parents oftentimes focus all their attentions on that child and exert much pressure on him or her(原因一). Moreover, numerous parents intend to realize their unfulfilled dreams by letting their children learn what they failed to learn and apply for the college by which they failed to be accepted, because they have become richer and they believe that they have the power to make what they wanted and want come true now(原因二). For instance, my uncle used to be a poor man and his dream that one day he would become a violinist was broken because of lack of money. But he made a fortune by selling coals, and then forced his son, my younger brother to practice playing violin. My brother was a huge fan of sports, but now he has to play violin everyday unwillingly and ofter quarrels with their parents(舉例：原來-然后-結(jié)局).

To sum up, it is unreasonable for parents to control their children’s life(總結(jié)句). In order to help them grow happily and healthily, parents are supposed to communicate with their kids about what they are really interested in(建議一，目的句型). Meanwhile, it is about time that parents let their kids make their own choices(建議二，“是時候”句型). Only in these ways will children grow in a psychologically happy environment and realize their own dreams.

文都教育版：
“Good news mom! I was accepted to the college of your choice.”

　　范文：

　　As is clearly depicted in the above picture, a daughter tells his mother a piece of good news that she has been admitted to a university as her mother desires. There is no denial in saying that the cartoon leaves us such a deep impression that we can not help thinking over a question: What role should parents play in their children’s growth?

　　From my point of view, during the process of a child’s growth, the role of parents is mainly listed as the following two aspects. On one hand, there is no doubt that parents are liable to take good care of their children. On the other hand, in children’s personal growth, parents ought to play a role as a person who helps children develop self-dependence, which carries more significant to children’s future life. In other words, parents should encourage their sons or daughters to be independent rather than reliant on others.

　　To conclude, in children’s personal growth, parents are responsible to care for their children. However, considering that they will grow up and live their own life in some day, parents should enable their children to acquire the ability to be self-independent.

　　譯文：

　　如上所示，一個女兒告訴她媽媽有一個好消息：她已經(jīng)考上媽媽為她選擇的大學(xué)了。不可否認(rèn)的是，這幅畫給我們留下了非常深刻的印象，因此我們禁不住要思考這樣一個問題，那就是，父母在子女成長過程中應(yīng)該扮演什么角色呢?

　　個人認(rèn)為，父母在子女成長過程中所扮演的角色主要有以下兩方面。一方面，毫無疑問，父母有責(zé)任照顧好自己子女。另一方面，在子女的成長過程中，父母應(yīng)扮演幫助子女養(yǎng)成自立的角色，因為自立對子女的未來成長是至關(guān)重要的。換句話說，父母應(yīng)該鼓勵自己的孩子自力更生而不是依賴他人。

　　總之，在子女的個人成長過程中，父母有責(zé)任照顧好子女。然而，考慮到總有一天子女會長大成人，自己生活，因此父母應(yīng)該讓子女養(yǎng)成自立更勝的能力。