托福寫(xiě)作高分滿分范文點(diǎn)評(píng)和思路解析：雕像為誰(shuí)而塑？

　　Whom in your country would you choose to build a statue for?

　　Your city has decided to build a statue or monument to honor a famous person in your country. Who would you choose? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.

　　寫(xiě)作思路展開(kāi)結(jié)構(gòu)分析

　　這道題目的考點(diǎn)有兩個(gè)，一個(gè)當(dāng)然是選擇哪一位名人來(lái)進(jìn)行展開(kāi)，另一個(gè)則是你對(duì)自己的城市到底有多少了解，換句話說(shuō)，考生不僅要詳細(xì)說(shuō)明這位名人的事跡，同時(shí)也要把名人和當(dāng)?shù)氐年P(guān)聯(lián)性寫(xiě)出來(lái)，比如名人是這個(gè)城市出身的，或者名人為這個(gè)城市做出了哪些貢獻(xiàn)等等。這其實(shí)就相當(dāng)于杜絕了很多同學(xué)隨便扯大旗找一些外國(guó)名人來(lái)寫(xiě)的思路。

　　本話題高分范文賞析

　　If my city has decided to build a statue to honor a famous person in my country, I would choose a late singer, Teresa Teng. She was born in 1950s, and died of a severe asthma attack at age 41 in May 1995 while holidaying in Chiang Mai, Thailand, triggering an outpouring of grief among her legions of fans in Asia and elsewhere. During her brilliant stage career, favored by fans all over Asia, she moved millions of people. Her famous songs include "sweet", "story of small town", and "the moon represents my heart", etc. It was said that it was her who introduced several generations in China to a certain field of popular music.

　　Her songs have accompanied the growth and development of many people in China. In the home of these generations' soul, her sweet voice has become immortal beauty and memory. Although she's gone, her sound of singing has never vanished. She is constantly commemorated; from Beijing to Taipei, Hong Kong to Singapore, her ubiquitous fans observe her commemoration from time to time, cherishing her incredible beauty, and her voice that sounds to come from heaven. Her sweet songs made her a legend, and are still regularly heard on radio, andcontinue to have a following in Chinese communities all over the world.

　　She should be remembered not only because of her beauty and voice, but also because of her great charity. She founded "Teresa Teng foundation" during her lifetime. The purpose of the foundation is to cultivate and support gifted artists, and at the same time the foundation includes a trust to distribute scholarship to make sure that art students have opportunities to accomplish what they actually can. Every year, The Teresa Teng Foundation also send a great amount of money as a charity to help homeless children. And these activities are supported by her fans all over the world.