托福獨(dú)立寫作難點(diǎn)話題思路解讀和高分范文賞析：young children spending time practicing sports

　　The advantages and disadvantages of young children spending much time practicing sports.

　　Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

　　寫作思路展開結(jié)構(gòu)分析

　　要求同時(shí)說明優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)，因此需要做兩方面的論述展開。從優(yōu)點(diǎn)上來說，兒童參加體育活動(dòng)對(duì)身體健康有好處，也有助于培養(yǎng)與人和睦相處的能力。從缺點(diǎn)上展開，可以說兒童參加體育活動(dòng)會(huì)耽誤學(xué)習(xí)，一時(shí)的放松會(huì)導(dǎo)致長遠(yuǎn)的影響(instant pleasure costs long-term benefits)等等。

　　本話題高分范文賞析

　　It is a common activity not only in China, but across the world, for young children to spend copious amounts of time playing and practicing sports. There is much discussion as to whether this is a beneficial way for young people to spend their time. In order to decide, we must consider the advantages and disadvantages. There are many advantages to children spending their time playing sports. First, children will be stronger and healthier because they are getting exercise. This not only has the immediate effects of being healthy children, but also affects their health later in life, as they will develop good habits for taking care of their physical shape and their health. Second, exercise is known to be an excellent appetite and weight controller. In recent years, with the further development of China, many young people are becoming overweight. Playing sports in one 's childhood could definitely help this situation. Finally, sports are excellent social activities. If one plays sports early in life, he will learn about teamwork, perseverance, and goal setting. All of these lessons will help one to become a happier, better adjusted adult. There are also a few disadvantages to children spending time playing sports. For example, playing sports detracts from study time, which is very important. If children are playing sports so often that they cannot concentrate on their studies, they should definitely stop. Another disadvantage is that sports can sometimes be dangerous, causing life-long injuries to a person that is not careful. Finally, some people believe that sports are overly competitive, and push children too hard at a young age. It is possible that children would lose self-confidence and self-esteem if they constantly lost at sports. Sometimes, it is the parents that push the children too hard at sports, causing an unwillingness to participate due to a lack of enjoyment. Overall, I think that sports are beneficial to a young person's life. They offer valuable skills that will be useful throughout one's entire life. As long as one is careful and does not overdo it, sports are an excellent idea for all young children.