雅思大作文語料庫：家庭教育的利弊

【教育類】

Many parents choose to teach their children at home rather than sending their children to school, do you think the benefits of home schooling outweigh its drawbacks? 很多家長選擇讓他們的孩子接受家庭教育而非課堂教育，你是否認(rèn)為家庭教育利大于弊?(新題出現(xiàn))

【相關(guān)題目】

1. Caring for children is probably the most important thing of the society. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take the childcare training courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? 教育孩子很重要，有人認(rèn)為，所有的父母都應(yīng)該學(xué)習(xí)育兒課程，是否認(rèn)同?(2013年1月19日)

2. Schools are no longer necessary, because children can get so much information available through Internet, and they can study just as well at home. What extent do you agree or disagree? 學(xué)校沒有必要了因?yàn)?，人們可以在互?lián)網(wǎng)獲得信息，可以在家里學(xué)習(xí)，這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)是否認(rèn)同?(2009年8月11日)

【頭腦風(fēng)暴】

小學(xué)畢業(yè)后，鄭亞旗即在家接受“私塾式”教育。厭惡大陸教育方式的鄭淵潔決定自己培養(yǎng)孩子。爸爸給他編撰了有趣的教材，例如，把中國的刑法的419項(xiàng)罪名編成了419個(gè)童話故事。三年之后，鄭亞旗學(xué)從這所特殊的“學(xué)校”畢業(yè)了。

鄭淵潔還發(fā)明了“逆向考試法”，就是兒子學(xué)完一個(gè)章節(jié)后，就這個(gè)章節(jié)的內(nèi)容自己編一張考卷來考爸爸。只要兒子能讓爸爸考不及格，那兒子就及格了。

童話大王的家庭教育是成功的案例，亞旗18歲的時(shí)候已經(jīng)是精神獨(dú)立，思想成熟，性格陽光的少年，他也更早地經(jīng)歷了求職和創(chuàng)業(yè)。但是，不是每個(gè)人都有時(shí)間成本和知識儲(chǔ)備去教育自己的孩子，因此，家庭教育并不適合大部分的父母。

【作家立場】 家庭教育有其獨(dú)有的利好，但是，不適合大部分的父母。

【思路拓展】

◆ 家庭教育(私塾教育)的利好

① 因材施教，量體裁衣，父母最愛孩子，最了解孩子，因此，對于孩子的教育更加耐心和有針對性。

② 增強(qiáng)家庭紐帶的很好的方式，父母和子女成為朋友，例如，作家鄭淵潔教育孩子，就是成功的案例。

◆ 課堂教育的利好

① 學(xué)習(xí)效果更好， 對比父母，教育者們專業(yè)上訓(xùn)練有素，了解教育的常識，可以總結(jié)學(xué)科的精華，因此，可助孩子們在學(xué)業(yè)上更加優(yōu)秀。

② 學(xué)校教育是一種獲得群體性的經(jīng)驗(yàn)成長的重要方式，小組討論及課堂互動(dòng)，來自老師的監(jiān)督和同齡人的壓力可以幫助自律性差的孩子們專注于學(xué)習(xí)。相反，接受家庭教育者，有可能失去學(xué)習(xí)的興趣和耐心，在社交方面力不從心，變得孤獨(dú)或自閉。

【范文賞析】

【首段】背景介紹 + 爭議焦點(diǎn)+　作家立場

Parents are, in most cases, extremely concerned about the growth of their children. When conventional teaching fails some parents, some of them prefer to educate their children at home. People have been pondering, for many years, whether or not home schooling is superior to traditional teaching without reaching any definite consensus. As I see it, as for those home learners, what will be lost is greater than what will be gained.

【解析】

1. fail sb 使某人失望

2. is superior to 優(yōu)越于

3. What will be lost is greater than what will be gained. 弊大于利

【二段】 家庭教育的利好

Some parents believe that it is more feasible to let their children receive domestic education because they believe this mode of education enables children to grow better both academically and mentally. One of the most glaring merits of family education is that students with diverse abilities can receive the custom-tailored education, which fits for them. After all, parents are most familiar with their children and willing to devote all their hearts to children’s character-training and moral education. Another benefit coming from parenting is that it is a good way to strengthen the family tie. The more time parents spend cultivating their children，the better parent-children relationship will be.

【解析】

1. grow better both academically and mentally 在學(xué)術(shù)和心智上都更好地成長

2. Students with diverse abilities can receive the custom-tailored education 不同的學(xué)生可以接受量體裁衣的教育。

3. devote all their hearts to children’s character-training and moral education 全心投注于專注于孩子們的性格培養(yǎng)和道德教育

4. parenting n父母對于孩子的教育

5. strengthen the family tie 增強(qiáng)家庭聯(lián)系

【三段】 家庭教育的弊端

Home education, however, might trigger some disadvantages to some extent. Virtually, on no account can we ignore its potential drawbacks. On the downsides, those home learners tend to be socially inadequate due to the lack of group experience. Even worse，one might become introverted or eccentric when he or she is confined to home schooling for a long time. By contrast, traditional classroom education can help youngsters to learn to how to communicate and associate with their peers. Another demerit might be that in comparison with parents, teachers are professionally well-trained, know the common sense of education and can summarize the core of knowledge. In this sense, those who receive traditional education are liable to excel academically.

【解析】

1. tend to be socially inadequate 傾向于變得社交方面力不從心

2. one might become introverted or eccentric 一個(gè)人也許會(huì)變得內(nèi)向，性格古怪

3. are professionally well-trained 專業(yè)上訓(xùn)練有素

4. know the common sense of education 了解教育的常識

5. can summarize the core of knowledge 可以總結(jié)學(xué)科的精華

6. are liable to excel academically 可能學(xué)習(xí)成績優(yōu)異

【尾段】 亮明觀點(diǎn) + 總結(jié)理由

In closing，my stand is that although home education might have some advantages in some facets, it is not universally suitable for most people. For one thing, educators outshine parents in terms of disseminating knowledge. For another, those who receive home education are more likely to be emotionally underdeveloped in their relations with their peers.

【解析】

1. Educators outshine parents in terms of disseminating knowledge 在傳授知識方面，教育者比家長更勝一籌。

2. Those who receive home education are more likely to be emotionally underdeveloped. 接受家庭教育者可能在情感上發(fā)育不良。

【經(jīng)典語料】

1. home schooling = family education = domestic education 家庭教育

2. parenting n父母對于孩子的教育

3. conventional teaching 傳統(tǒng)的教育

4. traditional classroom education傳統(tǒng)課程教育

5. classroom teaching 課堂教育

6. receive fine home education 接受良好的家庭教育

7. get educated at home 接受家庭教育

8. competitive atmosphere and pressure from peers 競爭的氛圍和來自同齡人的壓力

9. zero in on study = focus on learning = concentrate on study 專注于學(xué)習(xí)

10. Family education enhances the flexibility of learning 家庭教育提高了學(xué)習(xí)的靈活性