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雅思寫作備考:這樣寫開頭穩(wěn)妥拿高分

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2017年05月25日

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  俗話說(shuō)“一天之計(jì)在于晨,一年之計(jì)在于春”。雅思寫作的開頭段也有相同的道理,寫好開頭段對(duì)寫作整體的得分有舉足輕重的作用。下面老師根據(jù)自己多年的教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn),給出了寫好雅思作文開頭的幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單方法:

  很多國(guó)內(nèi)的考生受到寫中文作文或者傳統(tǒng)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)的影響,寫一篇文章的開頭段時(shí)總是想要盡力抓住考官的眼球,不停地?cái)[弄自己還不成熟的詞匯和句型,結(jié)果非但沒有得到想要的分?jǐn)?shù),反被考官倒打一耙。那么我們要如何在最短的時(shí)間內(nèi),以最簡(jiǎn)單以及最能得分的方式寫出好的作文開頭段呢?

  其實(shí)我們可以把雅思寫作題目中的提問(wèn)方式分成四個(gè)大類:觀點(diǎn)類(opinion essay)、討論類(discussion essay)、優(yōu)劣勢(shì)類(advantage and disadvantage essay)和報(bào)告類(report)。每一種提問(wèn)方式的題目都有自己不同的開頭段寫作方法。

  Part 1 Opinion Essay

  觀察觀點(diǎn)類題目的特征,我們不難發(fā)現(xiàn),此類題型的特征是題目有且只有一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)。而題目要求我們回答的是“同意”或“不同意”的觀點(diǎn)。所以只要確定好自己的觀點(diǎn),開頭段就可以寫出來(lái)。 例如:

  Some people believe that living in big cities is bad for health.

  Do you agree or disagree?

  如果,我們選擇同意此觀點(diǎn),可以根據(jù)“背景句+直接轉(zhuǎn)述題目+個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)”的公式。

  These days, it is quite common to see that a growing number of people choose to settle down in large cities. (背景句) But some people argue that leading an urban life would produce negative influences on people’s health. (直接轉(zhuǎn)述題目) Personally, I agree with this idea. (個(gè)人觀點(diǎn))

  如果選擇不同意題目觀點(diǎn),則可以用“although”的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句進(jìn)行改寫,得到:

  These days, it is quite common to see that a growing number of people choose to settle down in large cities. (背景句) Although some people argue that leading an urban life would produce negative influences on people’s health, (although +直接轉(zhuǎn)述題目) personally, I do not agree with this idea. (個(gè)人觀點(diǎn))

  Part 2 Discussion Essay

  觀察討論類的題目,可以發(fā)現(xiàn),這樣的題目會(huì)有兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn),并且題目要求“討論雙方觀點(diǎn)”和“給出自己的觀點(diǎn)”。這樣的題目中,其實(shí)只用在開頭段中寫出背景句和轉(zhuǎn)述雙方觀點(diǎn)就好了,至于個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn),可以放到personal idea的段落中。如:

  Some people think citizens should be responsible for their own health costs. Others think it is better to have a health care system which provides free health services.

  Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

  這個(gè)題目的開頭段就可以寫為:

  People in some countries are paying an increasing amount of money for seeing a doctor, even for a minor illness. (背景句) But, still, some people assert that individuals themselves are supposed to pay for such fees. (一方觀點(diǎn)) However, other people disagree and suggest that it is the government’s responsibility to undertake the health costs for its citizens. (另一方觀點(diǎn))

  Part 3 Advantages & Disadvantage Essay

  優(yōu)劣勢(shì)的題目,一般而言都會(huì)給出一個(gè)現(xiàn)象或者是趨勢(shì),這又剛好和我們開頭段中的“背景句”吻合了,所以在優(yōu)劣勢(shì)文章的開頭段的時(shí)候就沒有必要再寫背景句了,直接轉(zhuǎn)述題目就可以了。但是要表達(dá)出自己的“優(yōu)大于劣”或者“劣大于優(yōu)”的觀點(diǎn),只需要用一句話就搞定了。如:

  Shopping online is replacing shopping in stores.

  Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

  開頭段可以寫為:

  These days, it is common to see that people prefer choosing online shopping to shopping in physical stores. Although some problems would occur as this trend continues, I believe such development brings more benefits.

  Part 4 Report

  其實(shí)report最簡(jiǎn)單,因?yàn)橥ǔn}目和優(yōu)劣勢(shì)文章一樣,會(huì)給出一個(gè)現(xiàn)象或趨勢(shì),所以開頭段的組成部分就只有改寫題目。如:

  In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes.

  Why is this happening?

  What are the possible solutions to solve this problem?

  開頭段可以寫為:

  These days, it is common to see that the rate of youth crime has been increasing dramatically all over the globe and it is a most worrying issue of modern society.


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