雅思大作文語(yǔ)料庫(kù)：初為父母是否需學(xué)習(xí)育兒課程

【教育類】

Some people believe that new parents should attend a parenting course to learn how to bring up their children well，to what extent do you agree or disagree? 有人認(rèn)為：初為父母應(yīng)該參加育兒培訓(xùn)課程學(xué)習(xí)如何撫養(yǎng)孩子，你在多大程度上同意這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)?(2016年5月28)

【相關(guān)考題】

① Caring for children is probably the most important thing of the society. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take the childcare training courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? 教育的孩子很重要，有人認(rèn)為，所有的父母都應(yīng)該學(xué)習(xí)育兒課程，你在多大程度上同意這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)? (2013年1月19日)

② Some working parents believe childcare centers can provide best care for their children, others believe that family members like grandparents can do a better job. Discuss both sides and give your opinion? 有些父母認(rèn)為育兒中心可以更好地照料孩子，有些父母認(rèn)為祖父母可以更好地照顧孩子，討論兩種觀點(diǎn)，給出你的意見。(2015年3月14日)

【頭腦風(fēng)暴】

① 老師喜歡看芒果臺(tái)的《變形記》，有一集描述的是貴州貧困地區(qū)的留守兒童，他們的父母都在城市里打工，家庭貧困，父母辛苦賺錢僅僅是維持孩子的基本生活和讓孩子有機(jī)會(huì)接受更好的教育。這些父母，不可能有經(jīng)濟(jì)成本去專門學(xué)習(xí)育兒培訓(xùn)課程。

② 對(duì)于很多社會(huì)精英而言，盡管他們有經(jīng)濟(jì)實(shí)力參加育兒培訓(xùn)課程，但是，他們又沒有時(shí)間和精力，所以，讓他們專門學(xué)習(xí)育兒培訓(xùn)課程也是不現(xiàn)實(shí)的，盡管他們可能有學(xué)習(xí)的愿望。

【作家立場(chǎng)】

雖然我們不能低估親自學(xué)習(xí)育兒課程可能帶來(lái)的利好，但是，不是所有的父母都可以親自學(xué)習(xí)育兒培訓(xùn)課程。

【思路拓展】

初為父母學(xué)習(xí)育兒培訓(xùn)課程的利好：

① 我承認(rèn)，在時(shí)間和經(jīng)濟(jì)條件允許的情況下，父母?jìng)儗W(xué)習(xí)育兒課程對(duì)于孩子的教育和成長(zhǎng)有利好的影響，因?yàn)楦改競(jìng)冋_的教育和培養(yǎng)會(huì)使孩子們更加健康地快樂地成長(zhǎng)，同時(shí)，這有助于增強(qiáng)家庭紐帶。

為何不是所有的父母都能學(xué)習(xí)育兒培訓(xùn)課程：

①對(duì)于很多社會(huì)精英而言，例如，繁忙的企業(yè)家或文體明星，他們多數(shù)忙于事業(yè)發(fā)展，沒有時(shí)間和精力去專門學(xué)習(xí)育兒課程。但是，他們可以努力賺錢，聘請(qǐng)專業(yè)的育兒老師來(lái)教育孩子，因此，父母的努力同樣有助于孩子們的健康成長(zhǎng)。

②對(duì)于貧困家庭而言，父母的可支配收入有限，學(xué)習(xí)育兒課程雖有利好，卻會(huì)增加父母的經(jīng)濟(jì)負(fù)擔(dān)，在現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中很難實(shí)現(xiàn)。例如，我喜歡看芒果臺(tái)的《變形記》 (一部紀(jì)錄片)，有一集描述的是貴州貧困地區(qū)的留守兒童，他們的父母都在城市里打工，孩子們的生活非常貧困和艱苦，父母辛苦工作僅是維持孩子的基本生活和 讓孩子們接受良好教育。這些父母，不可能有經(jīng)濟(jì)成本去專門學(xué)習(xí)育兒培訓(xùn)課程。

【范文賞析】

【首段】 背景介紹 + 爭(zhēng)議焦點(diǎn) + 作家立場(chǎng)

Parents are the initial teachers who exert a subtle influence on the character-training and mental growth of their children. Fine parenting is what every couple with child aspires after. People have been debating the pros and cons of requiring parents to participate in the childcare training courses without reaching any definite consensus. As I see it, even though ideal parenting will play essential roles in terms of children’s rearing, not every couple with child has to partake of the childcare training courses.

【二段】初為父母學(xué)習(xí)育兒課程的利好：

Indeed, I have to concede that some merits could be gained via encouraging parents to get involved in childcare-related training courses. The most striking merit is that these courses help the new parents acquire enough basic knowledge on how to see to a baby. It is conceivable that parents won't do improper things when caring the little babies, which can avoid the hurt to the babies. Yet, this is not universally suitable for every family with children, and sometimes the basic knowledge on baby-caring could be offered by other ways.

【三段】為何不是所有的父母都應(yīng)該學(xué)習(xí)育兒課程：

Also，there are numerous social elites who seldom have time to take the training courses. Compelling them to learn the child-care related courses is not only a waste of their time but also a loss for their careers because they would generate less social value. Likewise, as for those who cannot afford the cost of the course, they could acquire child-care knowledge via books, TV programs or the Internet because these couples have to make a decent living and to feed their newly born baby. Lastly, Even though care training enjoys some merits, it might disturb the development of creative thoughts that parents conceive of to raise a child. In this sense, the new method might be misled by the courses.

【尾段】總結(jié)立場(chǎng)

Overall, my stand is that childcare training courses might not be really needed. Actually, when it comes to how to rear and educate children, the option should be more directly given to every individual parent.

【經(jīng)典語(yǔ)料】

1. Child rearing is one of the key words in a family. 在家庭中，撫養(yǎng)孩子是關(guān)鍵詞之一。

2. take part in the childcare training courses = participate in the childcare class 參加育兒培訓(xùn)課程

【解析】 the childcare class = the childcare training courses 育兒培訓(xùn)課程

3. acquire relevant childcare skill = learn relevant childcare technique 學(xué)習(xí)相關(guān)的育兒技巧

4. Parents are the initial teachers of their children who exert a subtle influence on the character-training and mental growth of their kids. 父母是最初的老師，他們對(duì)于孩子們的精神成長(zhǎng)以及性格培養(yǎng)有潛移默化的影響。

【解析】 exert a subtle influence on sb 對(duì)于……施加了微妙的影響

5. Fierce competition and excessive workload sometimes will make it hard for some parents to participate in the childcare class. 激烈的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)和過量的工作負(fù)荷有時(shí)候會(huì)使父母?jìng)兒茈y參加育兒培訓(xùn)課程。

6. As for those poverty-stricken families，parents usually have limited financial budget at their own disposal. 對(duì)于貧困家庭而言，父母的可支配收入是有限的。

7. The participation of the childcare training courses will add financial burden to a family. 參加育兒培訓(xùn)課程會(huì)增加一個(gè)家庭的經(jīng)濟(jì)負(fù)擔(dān)。

【拓展】 financial burden = economic pressure 經(jīng)濟(jì)的壓力

【拓展】 impose much pressure upon a family economically 增加一個(gè)家庭的經(jīng)濟(jì)壓力

8. Those social elites have to zero in on pursuing their career development. 那些社會(huì)精英不得不專注于事業(yè)的發(fā)展。

9. In this sense，inviting the professionally well-trained baby-teachers to take care of their children might be a superior choice. 從這個(gè)意義上，邀請(qǐng)專業(yè)上訓(xùn)練有素的育兒教師去照料他們的孩子是更好的選擇。

10. Parental participation in childcare training courses could，to a large extent，strengthen the family tie. 父母參與育兒培訓(xùn)課程可以在很大程度上增強(qiáng)家庭的紐帶。

【解析】 strengthen the family tie 增強(qiáng)家庭紐帶

11. Parents will have a better understanding about childcare， therefore， they are more likely to enjoy harmonious and intimate relationship with their children. 父母?jìng)儠?huì)對(duì)于如何照料孩子會(huì)有更好的理解, 因此，他們和孩子們的關(guān)系更加和諧和親密。

12. Encouraging parents to participate in training courses related to childcare can enhance parent-child relationship. 鼓勵(lì)父母?jìng)儏⒓佑齼合嚓P(guān)的課程會(huì)增進(jìn)父母和子女的關(guān)系。

13. If possible，all parents should undergo a period of parenting class . 如果可能，所所有的父母都參加一個(gè)階段的培訓(xùn)課程。

【解析】 parenting n父母對(duì)于子女的教育

14. On the part of many extremely needy couples with children， life is a perpetual struggle against poverty. 對(duì)于很多有孩子的貧困的夫妻而言，他們的生活就是和貧困永恒斗爭(zhēng)的過程。

【解析】 perpetual adj 永恒的

15. The debate reminds me of a documentary film played by the Mango TV station，which described some stay-at-home children in the remote rural areas. 這個(gè)話題使我想起了芒果電視臺(tái)的一部紀(jì)錄片，紀(jì)錄片描述的是在遙遠(yuǎn)的貧困地區(qū)的留守兒童。

【解析】 some stay-at-home children 一些留守兒童

16. The vast majority of them live under the poverty line 他們中大多數(shù)人生活在貧困線以下。

17. What their parents strive for is only to enable their children to sustain the basic life need and receive better education. 他們的父母努力奮斗的目標(biāo)僅僅是使他們的孩子們可以維持基本的生活以及接受更好的教育。

【解析】 strive for 為了……奮斗

18. Numerous instructive childcare-related programs can be available on TV and on the Internet. 很多有意義的和育兒相關(guān)的節(jié)目可以在網(wǎng)絡(luò)和電視中獲得。

【解析】 instructive adj 有教育意義的

19. We have to consider that individual family has different situation. 我們不得不考慮到個(gè)體的家庭有不同的情況。

20. In the final analysis，it is rather superficial to simply believe that all parents should be required to get involved in the childcare training courses. 分析之后：簡(jiǎn)單認(rèn)為所有的父母都應(yīng)該被要求去學(xué)習(xí)育兒培訓(xùn)課程是相當(dāng)膚淺的。

【解析】 it is rather superficial to simply believe that …… 簡(jiǎn)單認(rèn)為…… 是相等膚淺的